Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, use plural form 'whole grain breads' more naturally as 'whole grain bread'.

예시: Since moving to the UK, I usually eat whole grain bread for breakfast because it's affordable and convenient. Back in my country, rice was my staple breakfast food.

제안: Your answer covers the main points but is a bit long and repetitive. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'however' more effectively, and avoid redundancy such as 'have breakfasts'. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'I was no good at waking up early' to 'I wasn't good at waking up early'.

예시: Yes, I believe breakfast is very important, especially for children, because it helps them stay healthy and concentrate better at school. However, I rarely ate breakfast as a child because I wasn't good at waking up early.

제안: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, 'When I was a child, I loved waking up early because I looked forward to meeting my friends at school. However, now I find it difficult to have a healthy morning routine because I don't enjoy waking up early.'

예시: When I was a child, I loved waking up early because I looked forward to meeting my friends at school. However, nowadays I find it hard to have a healthy morning routine since I don't like waking up early.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid awkward phrases like 'change my morning routine regularly' which suggests frequent changes. Instead, say 'improve my morning routine'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and correct word order, e.g. 'Yesterday, I cooked my breakfast for the first time.'

예시: Yes, I would like to improve my morning routine to help me concentrate better on my studies. Since moving to London, I've been trying new things; for example, yesterday I cooked my breakfast for the first time.

× I usually have whole grain breads because it is affordable and easy to eat.

✓ I usually have whole grain bread because it is affordable and easy to eat.

The word 'bread' is an uncountable noun when referring to the food in general, so it should not be pluralized as 'breads'. Using 'bread' is correct here.

× Every morning before coming here I usually had rice for breakfast because it is my staple in my country.

✓ Every morning before coming here I usually had rice for breakfast because it was my staple in my country.

The sentence refers to a past habit, so the verb 'to be' should be in the past tense 'was' to match the time frame.

× I didn't have a breakfast in my childhood as I was no good at waking up early.

✓ I didn't have breakfast in my childhood as I was no good at waking up early.

The word 'breakfast' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article 'a' before it in this context.

× Yes, when there was a child I loved waking up early as I always looking forward to me my friends at my school.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I loved waking up early as I was always looking forward to seeing my friends at my school.

The phrase 'when there was a child' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. Also, 'always looking' needs the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past continuous tense. 'Looking forward to me my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'looking forward to seeing my friends'.

× However I find it difficult for me to spend healthy morning as I don't like to.

✓ However, I find it difficult to have a healthy morning because I don't like to.

The phrase 'for me to spend healthy morning' is awkward and ungrammatical. It should be 'to have a healthy morning'. Also, 'as I don't like to' is incomplete; 'because I don't like to' is clearer. A comma after 'However' improves sentence flow.

× Yes, I would like to change my morning routine regularly so that I can concentrate on my studies.

✓ Yes, I would like to regularly change my morning routine so that I can concentrate on my studies.

The adverb 'regularly' is better placed before the verb 'change' to clearly modify the action.

× For example, yesterday I firstly cooked my breakfast.

✓ For example, yesterday I cooked my breakfast first.

The adverb 'firstly' is awkward here; 'first' is more natural and should be placed after the verb 'cooked'.