Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, use correct verb tenses and sentence structures, for example, say 'I sometimes add cottage cheese to increase its protein content' instead of 'I added'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: I usually eat one egg and avocado toast. Sometimes, I add cottage cheese to increase the protein content and make it healthier.

제안: Reduce the use of filler words to improve fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and avoid repeating 'uh' excessively.

예시: Yes, I believe breakfast is very important because it helps us start the day positively and maintain our energy throughout the day.

제안: Try to organize your answer with a clear contrast using linking words like 'when I was a child' and 'now'. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points fully. For example, finish the sentence about cottage cheese by mentioning what it is high in.

예시: When I was a child, I used to eat sweet things like jam, toast, and honey for breakfast. However, now I prefer eggs and cottage cheese because they are high in protein.

제안: Focus on speaking clearly and avoid filler words to improve fluency. Use correct verb forms and complete your ideas. For example, say 'I would like to get up earlier to go for a run because it boosts my mood, helps me stay fit, and improves my brain function.'

예시: I would like to get up earlier to go for a run because it boosts my mood, helps me stay fit, and improves my brain function.

× I usually eat 1 egg and uh, avocado toast and sometimes I added some cottage cheese to increases its protein, umm, to increase its protein content and make and uh, making it more healthy.

✓ I usually eat 1 egg and uh, avocado toast and sometimes I add some cottage cheese to increase its protein content and make it healthier.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'added' instead of the present tense 'add' to match the habitual action indicated by 'usually'. Also, 'to increases' should be 'to increase' because after 'to' the base form of the verb is used. 'Making it more healthy' is corrected to 'make it healthier' for proper verb form and adjective use.

× Uh, yes, I believe, umm, the breakfast is really important because, uh, it helps us, uh, start uh, our day on a positive note and uh, it can uh, help us to maintain our energy during a day.

✓ Uh, yes, I believe, umm, breakfast is really important because, uh, it helps us, uh, start uh, our day on a positive note and uh, it can uh, help us to maintain our energy during the day.

The definite article 'the' before 'breakfast' is unnecessary when speaking generally about meals. Also, 'during a day' should be 'during the day' to refer to the specific time period of the day.

× Actually, when uh, I was a child, I used to eat uh, sweet things like umm, jam and toast and honey in the morning. But these days as I get older, I prefer to eat, uh, eggs and uh, cottage cheese that they are high in.

✓ Actually, when uh, I was a child, I used to eat uh, sweet things like umm, jam, toast, and honey in the morning. But these days, as I get older, I prefer to eat eggs and cottage cheese because they are high in protein.

The phrase 'cottage cheese that they are high in' is incomplete and unclear. It should be restructured to 'cottage cheese because they are high in protein' to clarify the meaning. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.

× Actually, I like to get up uh, earlier to go for a run because, uh, I know that it helps me, uh, it umm, boosts my mood and stay fit and actually, umm, it's going to increase my, uh, brain.

✓ Actually, I like to get up uh, earlier to go for a run because, uh, I know that it helps me, uh, boost my mood and stay fit and actually, umm, it's going to improve my brain function.

The phrase 'helps me, uh, it umm, boosts' is redundant and awkward; 'helps me boost' is correct. Also, 'increase my brain' is incorrect; 'improve my brain function' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.