Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih alami dan perhatikan penggunaan preposisi dan kata sambung.

예시: I can speak four languages. First, Indonesian, which is my native language. Second, Javanese, a local language in Indonesia. Third, English and Arabic. I also know a little Korean and Chinese because I enjoy learning new languages.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung ide yang baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Perbaiki penggunaan kata ganti dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan mudah dipahami. Gunakan kata sambung yang tepat untuk menghubungkan ide-ide Anda.

예시: I think learning a new language depends largely on our interest. For example, since I am still interested in Korean, I find it easier and more enjoyable to learn. However, if someone is not motivated or interested, they might find it more challenging to study a new language.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan subjek, predikat, dan objek yang jelas. Gunakan kata sambung yang tepat untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kalimat yang terlalu panjang atau membingungkan.

예시: Absolutely, I want to learn other languages in the future. However, I need to focus on mastering one language first. After that, I can learn another language depending on the country I will visit.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung alasan yang baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai. Hindari pengulangan kata dan buat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.

예시: I learn English because I want to travel to other countries and explore the world. I also enjoy learning new cultures and languages. English is a bridge that helps me achieve my dreams.

× I can speak for about four languages.

✓ I can speak about four languages.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate an approximate number is 'about'. So, 'speak about four languages' is correct.

× I speak with that English and Arabic.

✓ I speak English and Arabic.

The preposition 'with' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. We say 'speak English and Arabic' without 'with'.

× I can speak a little about Korean and Chinese, but only a little.

✓ I can speak a little Korean and Chinese, but only a little.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here. We say 'speak a little Korean' rather than 'speak a little about Korean' when referring to language ability.

× I find it easier and more enjoyable to them.

✓ I find it easier and more enjoyable to learn them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb 'learn' after 'to'. The phrase 'to them' is incorrect; it should be 'to learn them' to make sense.

× However, is someone is not motivated and interested in, they might find it more challenging to study in new language.

✓ However, if someone is not motivated and interested, they might find it more challenging to study a new language.

The sentence has extra 'is' and incorrect preposition 'in'. Also, 'a new language' is the correct article usage. The sentence structure is corrected by adding 'if' and removing unnecessary words.

× I'm interested in learning the other languages, but I need to focus on one language that I can speak up too.

✓ I'm interested in learning other languages, but I need to focus on one language that I can speak well first.

The phrase 'speak up too' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'speak well first' to indicate proficiency before moving on. Also, 'the other languages' should be 'other languages' without 'the'.

× So after that I can move to another language is depend on the country that I will visit.

✓ So after that, I can move to another language depending on the country that I will visit.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'is depend on' should be 'depending on' to correctly link the clauses.

× I want to go to a explorer, the world here.

✓ I want to be an explorer of the world here.

The article 'a' before 'explorer' is correct but the sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Be an explorer' is the correct phrase. Also, 'the world here' is better expressed as 'of the world here'.

× And then I like the learning new culture, I like learning new languages.

✓ And then I like learning new cultures, I like learning new languages.

The phrase 'the learning new culture' is incorrect. It should be 'learning new cultures' without 'the' and with plural 'cultures' to match the context.

× English is one of the bridge for me to go to my dream.

✓ English is one of the bridges for me to achieve my dream.

'One of the bridge' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the bridges' (plural). Also, 'go to my dream' is awkward; 'achieve my dream' is more natural.