Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“learned about English”应为“learned English”。建议简洁明了地表达，避免冗余。

예시: I can speak Chinese, which is my mother tongue, and English, which I have studied for ten years.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“when I learn about English”应为“when I learned English”。建议使用连贯的连接词，并提供更具体的细节。

예시: Yes, definitely. Learning a new language is time-consuming and complicated. For example, it took me about ten years to become proficient in English.

제안: 回答中使用了口语化词汇“wanna”，不够正式。表达应更自然且语法正确，如“learn about Spanish”应为“learn Spanish”。建议丰富细节并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, definitely. I am curious about Spanish, so if I have the chance in the future, I would like to learn Spanish and explore the culture of Spanish-speaking countries.

제안: 回答中表达不够准确，如“compulsory clause”应为“compulsory subject”。使用口语词汇“wanna”不正式。建议结构更清晰，避免重复。

예시: I learn English for several reasons. Firstly, it is a compulsory subject in China. Additionally, I want to communicate with people from different countries.

× I was familiar with those languages.

✓ I have been familiar with those languages.

这里使用现在完成时更合适，因为学习英语的经历从过去持续到现在。过去时"was"表示过去某一时刻的状态，不符合语境。

× I have learned about English for 10 years

✓ I have learned English for 10 years

动词"learn"后面不需要介词"about"，直接加学习的内容即可。

× when I learn about English, I spent about 10 years

✓ when I was learning English, I spent about 10 years

描述过去的动作时，"learn"应使用过去进行时"was learning"，表示动作在过去一段时间内持续发生。

× I wanna learn about Spanish and explore more culture about this country.

✓ I wanna learn Spanish and explore more about the culture of this country.

"learn"后面不加介词"about"，直接加语言名称；"explore more culture about this country"表达不准确，应改为"explore more about the culture of this country"。

× English is a compulsory clause in China

✓ English is a compulsory course in China

"clause"是"条款"的意思，语境中应为"course"（课程）。

× I wanna connect with people from different countries

✓ I want to connect with people from different countries

"wanna"是口语缩写，正式场合应使用"want to"。