Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免断句不完整，同时要用连词使句子更连贯。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持。

예시: I can speak Chinese, which is my mother tongue, and English. I have been learning English at school for many years, and I often use it to communicate with my friends.

제안: 回答中断句不完整，且出现了不明词汇，影响表达清晰度。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连词连接，具体说明原因。

예시: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of time and energy to memorize new words, practice grammar, and improve speaking and writing skills.

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答，再用连词连接理由，表达具体的计划和兴趣。

예시: Yes, I am very enthusiastic about learning other languages. If I have enough spare time in the future, I will try to learn them because I find it interesting.

제안: 回答断断续续，缺少连贯性和完整句子。建议用完整句子表达学习英语的目的，并用连词连接不同的理由。

예시: I learn English to pass the entrance exam and get into a good high school. Later, I hope to find a decent job in my country by using my English skills.

× I can speak Chinese and the English Chinese is my mother tongue.

✓ I can speak Chinese and English. Chinese is my mother tongue.

这里错误地使用了定冠词“the”在“the English Chinese”中，且句子结构混乱。应将句子拆分为两部分，分别说明会说中文和英语，并指出中文是母语。

× English is my second language which.

✓ English is my second language.

句子中“which”使用不当，导致句子不完整，应去掉“which”。

× I have learn learning at school.

✓ I have been learning at school.

“have learn learning”结构错误，正确表达现在完成进行时应为“have been learning”。

× For many years because of.

✓ I have been learning it for many years.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, it's difficult because you need to spend much time and energy. To memorize new words.

✓ Yes, it's difficult because you need to spend much time and energy to memorize new words.

“To memorize new words.”是不完整的句子，应与前句合并形成完整句子。

× You Grambo.

✓ You need grammar.

“Grambo”是拼写错误，应为“grammar”，且句子缺少谓语动词。

× And that you need to write. And speaking.

✓ And you need to write and speak.

句子断裂且结构不完整，应合并并调整动词形式。

× Yes. I have much enthusiasm. These languages in the future, if I have much spare time, I will try to learn other languages. For interesting.

✓ Yes, I have much enthusiasm for these languages. In the future, if I have much spare time, I will try to learn other languages for interest.

句子断裂且表达不清，需调整句子结构并修正“for interesting”为“for interest”。

× I have much enthusiasm.

✓ I have a lot of enthusiasm.

“enthusiasm”是不可数名词，通常用“a lot of”而非“much”修饰。

× I learn English. 2. Pass the edge exam.

✓ I learn English to pass the exam.

“2.”应为“to”，且“edge exam”应为“exam”，去掉多余词。

× To get to a high school. And then? To get a decent job. In my country.

✓ To get into a high school, and then to get a decent job in my country.

句子断裂且不完整，应合并为完整句子，调整介词使用。