Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I can speak English because it is commonly taught to children in Vietnam from a young age. For example, many kids start learning English in kindergarten, which helps me speak it more easily now.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, có chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể lý do tại sao học ngôn ngữ mới khó khăn, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because there are many rules to remember, such as grammar and tenses. For example, English has different verb tenses that can be confusing.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì tương lai đúng và câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: I don't think I will learn other languages in the future because English is very important nowadays. I believe English is enough for my daily life and work.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích cụ thể lý do học tiếng Anh và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I learn English because it provides many opportunities for study and work. People who know English are often more appreciated and have better chances to get a good job.

× language I can speak is English because I am a normal person in Vietnam, because people in there tend to give children. Learn English when they in kindergarten so I can speak English more easily.

✓ The languages I can speak are English because I am a normal person in Vietnam, where people tend to let children learn English when they are in kindergarten, so I can speak English more easily.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' to match the context of the question. Also, 'people in there' is incorrect; it should be 'people there' or 'people in Vietnam'. The phrase 'give children. Learn English' is fragmented and should be combined properly. 'They in kindergarten' lacks the verb 'are'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× people in there tend to give children. Learn English when they in kindergarten so I can speak English more easily.

✓ People there tend to let children learn English when they are in kindergarten, so I can speak English more easily.

The preposition 'in' before 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also, 'give children. Learn English' is incorrect; the verb 'let' is more appropriate here to indicate allowing children to learn English. 'They in kindergarten' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I think it is difficult to learn new language because for. A symbol in English have alot of things to learn about this language like an certificate, ILS, R. Tell tense in English.

✓ Yes, I think it is difficult to learn a new language because, for example, English has a lot of things to learn about, like certificates, IELTS, and tenses in English.

The phrase 'new language' needs the article 'a' to be correct. 'A symbol in English have' is incorrect; it should be 'English has'. 'Alot' should be two words 'a lot'. 'An certificate' should be 'a certificate'. 'ILS, R. Tell tense' is unclear and likely refers to 'IELTS' and 'tenses'.

× I think I didn't learn other language in the future because in nowaday English is the important things to learn in real life and I think is enough to for my life.

✓ I think I will not learn other languages in the future because nowadays English is the important thing to learn in real life and I think it is enough for my life.

The modal verb 'will' is needed to talk about the future. 'Didn't learn' is past tense and incorrect here. 'Nowaday' should be 'nowadays'. 'Important things' should be singular 'important thing' to match the context. 'Is enough to for my life' is incorrect; it should be 'is enough for my life'.

× I think I didn't learn other language in the future because in nowaday English is the important things to learn in real life and I think is enough to for my life.

✓ I think I will not learn other languages in the future because nowadays English is the important thing to learn in real life and I think it is enough for my life.

The preposition 'in' before 'nowaday' is incorrect; it should be 'nowadays' without a preposition. Also, 'to for my life' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for'.

× Uhm, I learn English because uh. When we learn English have many chains for story or work.

✓ Uhm, I learn English because, uh, when we learn English, there are many chances for study or work.

The phrase 'have many chains for story or work' is incorrect. It should be 'there are many chances for study or work'. 'Chains' is a wrong word here; 'chances' is correct. 'Story' should be 'study'.

× When people learn English that is more appreciated. By I'm I mean nice rater to have a good job.

✓ When people learn English, they are more appreciated. By that, I mean it is nicer to have a good job.

The sentence lacks proper pronouns and connectors. 'That is more appreciated' should be 'they are more appreciated'. 'By I'm I mean nice rater' is unclear and should be 'By that, I mean it is nicer'. 'Rater' is incorrect; likely meant 'rather' or 'better'.