Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I can speak three languages: Punjabi, which is my mother tongue, English, and Hindi. I learned Punjabi at home and school, while English and Hindi were subjects I studied at school.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar and fluency. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I think learning a new language as an adult is challenging because we miss the early exposure. For instance, I am currently learning French, and it's difficult to grasp the basics, but I am committed to improving.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correcting grammar. Be more specific about your motivation and plans.

예시: Yes, I plan to learn Spanish in the future because I enjoy watching Spanish movies dubbed in Hindi or English. If I have the opportunity to take Spanish classes, I would gladly do so.

제안: Clarify your answer by directly addressing the question and improving grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your experience.

예시: Although I am not currently learning English, I studied it in school. I enjoyed learning the basics and various grammar rules, which helped me improve my language skills.

× Usually I can speak 3 languages.

✓ Usually I can speak 3 languages.

No correction needed here as '3 languages' is correctly plural.

× The first one is English, my mother tongue is Punjabi and the Hindi as well.

✓ The first one is English, my mother tongue is Punjabi and Hindi as well.

The definite article 'the' is not used before languages like 'Hindi' unless specifying a particular context. Here, 'Hindi' should be without 'the'.

× I learned Punjabi in my school and from my parents.

✓ I learned Punjabi at my school and from my parents.

The correct preposition for referring to a place of learning is 'at' rather than 'in' when talking about school as an institution.

× I learned English and Hindi in my school as different subjects.

✓ I learned English and Hindi at my school as different subjects.

Same as above, 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the place where learning occurred.

× If we have not learned something in our school, it's very difficult to uh learn the basics of a language when we are grown up as uh.

✓ If we have not learned something at our school, it's very difficult to learn the basics of a language when we are grown up.

Removed filler words 'uh' for clarity. Also, 'at' is the correct preposition for 'school'. The modal verb usage is correct here.

× For example, I am trying to learning the French right now.

✓ For example, I am trying to learn French right now.

After 'trying to', the base form of the verb 'learn' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'learning'. Also, 'the' before 'French' is unnecessary here.

× For example, I am trying to learning the French right now.

✓ For example, I am trying to learn French right now.

Languages like 'French' do not require the definite article 'the' unless in specific contexts.

× It is very difficult for me to grab the basics of it, but I'm trying my best to learn it.

✓ It is very difficult for me to grasp the basics of it, but I'm trying my best to learn it.

The verb 'grab' is informal and not appropriate here; 'grasp' is the correct verb meaning to understand. Pronouns are used correctly.

× Yes I do plan to learn the Spanish in future because I have seen some movies in like Spanish movies which are dubbed in Hindi or English.

✓ Yes, I do plan to learn Spanish in the future because I have seen some Spanish movies which are dubbed in Hindi or English.

'The Spanish' should be 'Spanish' without 'the'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future'. Removed redundant phrase 'in like'.

× But if I'll get the chance to take the classes of Spanish I would love to learn that language.

✓ But if I get the chance to take Spanish classes, I would love to learn that language.

In conditional sentences, the present simple 'if I get' is used instead of 'if I'll get'. Also, 'classes of Spanish' is better as 'Spanish classes'.

× Currently I'm not learning English, but when I was in school I used to have a subject English.

✓ Currently I'm not learning English, but when I was in school I used to have English as a subject.

'Have a subject English' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have English as a subject'.

× I was enjoying learning the basics of English and a different type of grammars rule in the English.

✓ I enjoyed learning the basics of English and different types of grammar rules in English.

'Was enjoying' is less appropriate here than simple past 'enjoyed' for a past habit. 'Grammars rule' is incorrect; it should be 'grammar rules'. Also, 'the English' is incorrect; just 'English' is correct.