Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อนและความสับสนในการใช้คำ เช่น ควรแยกประโยคให้ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: I can speak Thai, which is my native language, and I am currently learning English because it is essential for my studies and communication worldwide. Additionally, I have started learning a bit of Japanese to improve my language skills and explore new cultures.

제안: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

예시: Yes, I believe learning a new language is quite challenging, especially at the beginning, because it requires a lot of practice and accurate pronunciation. For example, when I started studying English, I found it difficult to fully understand native speakers, but with time and effort, I gradually improved.

제안: ควรตอบให้ชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล และให้รายละเอียดที่เฉพาะเจาะจงมากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือสะกดผิด

예시: Yes, I plan to learn new languages in the future because they open up many opportunities. Learning languages like Spanish and Japanese can help me communicate better and understand different cultures, which I find very important. For example, knowing these languages would make traveling easier and more enjoyable.

제안: ควรใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงตอบคำถามอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่สะกดผิดและประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

예시: I learn English because it is an international language that opens up many opportunities for communication, education, and career advancement. For example, many international companies use English as their primary language, so being proficient helps me connect with people and succeed professionally.

× I can't speak English and my native language with each Thai English is essential for my study and worldwide Thai help me communicate with friends and family.

✓ I can speak English and my native language, Thai. English is essential for my study and worldwide communication, and Thai helps me communicate with friends and family.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'can't' instead of 'can' and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation, causing confusion. The sentence should clearly state the languages spoken and their purposes, using correct conjunctions and punctuation to separate ideas.

× Additionally, I am about to learn a bit of Japanese to explore my language skill and explore new culture.

✓ Additionally, I am about to learn a bit of Japanese to improve my language skills and explore new cultures.

The phrase 'explore my language skill' is incorrect; it should be 'improve my language skills' to indicate enhancement. Also, 'explore new culture' should be plural 'new cultures' to refer to various cultures.

× Yes, separately, I've been a little believe that learning a new language can be quite strategic, especially at the beginning because it's request a lot of practicing and accurate pronunciation.

✓ Yes, actually, I believe that learning a new language can be quite challenging, especially at the beginning because it requires a lot of practice and accurate pronunciation.

The original sentence misuses 'separately' and 'a little believe'. 'Actually' fits better to express the speaker's opinion. 'Strategic' is incorrect here; 'challenging' is appropriate. 'It's request' should be 'it requires', and 'practicing' should be 'practice'.

× For example, when I study English I found it too difficult to speak fully understanding native speaker, but with the time and effort I gradually improve.

✓ For example, when I studied English, I found it too difficult to fully understand native speakers, but with time and effort, I gradually improved.

The verb tense should be consistent in past tense when referring to past experiences: 'study' to 'studied', 'improve' to 'improved'. Also, 'speak fully understanding native speaker' is incorrect; it should be 'fully understand native speakers'.

× Yes, I plan to study and I don't linger in the future.

✓ Yes, I plan to study and I don't linger in the future.

The sentence is unclear and 'I don't linger in the future' is awkward and incorrect. It likely intends to say 'I don't delay in the future' or 'I will not hesitate in the future'. However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes in the grammar problem list, and 'linger' is a vocabulary issue, no correction is made here.

× Learning a Lang new language open up opportunity.

✓ Learning a new language opens up opportunities.

'Lang' is a typo and should be removed. 'Language' is singular, so the verb should be 'opens' (third person singular). 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match the context.

× Better communication and understanding of different cultures which I find really influential.

✓ Better communication and understanding of different cultures, which I find really influential.

The sentence is a fragment lacking a main verb. Adding a comma before 'which' connects the clause properly. However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes in the grammar problem list, and sentence structure errors are ID 26, this is corrected here.

× For example machine and language like Spanish and Japanese could help me travel more easily.

✓ For example, languages like Spanish and Japanese could help me travel more easily.

'Machine and language' is incorrect; likely 'languages' is intended. 'Language' should be plural 'languages' to match the examples given.

× I learn English because it is a corporal language that open up normalized opportunity for communication, education and career achievement.

✓ I learn English because it is a global language that opens up numerous opportunities for communication, education, and career achievement.

'Corporal' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'global'. 'Open' should be 'opens' to agree with singular subject 'language'. 'Normalized opportunity' is incorrect; 'numerous opportunities' fits better.

× For instance, many international company use English at their primary language, so being a professional helped me connect with people while we additionally English allow me to exit.

✓ For instance, many international companies use English as their primary language, so being proficient helps me connect with people. Additionally, English allows me to succeed.

'Company' should be plural 'companies' to match 'many'. 'Use' should be 'use' (plural subject). 'At their primary language' should be 'as their primary language'. 'Being a professional helped me' is incorrect; 'being proficient helps me' is better. 'We additionally English allow me to exit' is unclear; corrected to 'Additionally, English allows me to succeed.'