Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I'm flown in Cantonese' and 'I'm learning the English.' Try to use correct verb forms and articles. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice. Keep your answer concise and natural by directly stating the languages you speak and your proficiency.

예시: I can speak Cantonese and Mandarin fluently, and I am currently learning English, although I am not very fluent yet.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, instead of 'strange grammar,' say 'complex grammar rules.' Also, avoid redundancy by combining sentences smoothly.

예시: Absolutely, I think learning a new language is difficult because, as a non-native speaker, you have to master many complex grammar rules and vocabulary.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy, such as 'I currently interested' and repeating 'French.' Use correct verb forms and articles, and connect your ideas with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I am currently interested in learning French because I find it very elegant, and I want to visit Paris for travel in the future.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases like 'there are there are' and use correct verb forms, such as 'our school has an English exam.' Also, organize your reasons clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: There are several reasons why I learn English. First, my school requires passing an English exam to graduate. More importantly, I want to communicate and make friends with people from other countries.

× I'm flown in Cantonese and Mandarin and I'm learning the English.

✓ I speak Cantonese and Mandarin and I'm learning English.

The phrase 'I'm flown' is incorrect because 'flown' is the past participle of 'fly' and cannot be used here. The correct verb is 'speak' to indicate language ability. Also, 'the English' is incorrect; 'English' as a language does not need 'the'.

× So there are three language I can speak, but the English is not very fluent.

✓ So there are three languages I can speak, but my English is not very fluent.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to three languages. Also, 'the English' is incorrect; 'English' as a language does not need 'the'. Using 'my English' is more natural to indicate proficiency.

× Absolutely yes, because if you are not a native speaker, you find there are many strange grammar that you need to learn.

✓ Absolutely yes, because if you are not a native speaker, you find there is much strange grammar that you need to learn.

'Grammar' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' should be replaced with 'much'. Also, 'grammar' is singular, so 'there are' should be 'there is'.

× Absolutely yes, because if you are not a native speaker, you find there are many strange grammar that you need to learn.

✓ Absolutely yes, because if you are not a native speaker, you find there is much strange grammar that you need to learn.

Since 'grammar' is uncountable and singular, the correct form is 'there is' instead of 'there are'.

× Yes, I currently interested in French because I think the French is very elegant and and I want to go to Paris for travelling so I want to learn the French in the future.

✓ Yes, I am currently interested in French because I think French is very elegant and I want to go to Paris for traveling, so I want to learn French in the future.

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I' to form the present continuous tense 'I am currently interested'. Also, 'the French' is incorrect; 'French' as a language or nationality adjective does not need 'the'. 'Travelling' is better as 'traveling' in American English.

× There are there are several reasons 1 is that our school have English examination so if you want to graduate you need to pass the exam and the most important reason is that I want to communicate and make friends with foreigners.

✓ There are several reasons. One is that our school has an English examination, so if you want to graduate, you need to pass the exam. The most important reason is that I want to communicate and make friends with foreigners.

'Our school have' is incorrect; 'school' is singular, so it should be 'has'. 'English examination' needs an article 'an' before it. Also, the sentence is long and should be split for clarity. 'There are there are' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'There are'.