Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'I am an Indian person' and directly state your languages. Also, try to add a linking phrase to make it smoother.

예시: My first language is Hindi, and I can also speak English fluently.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' properly, and avoid repeating words. Also, be more specific about why it is difficult.

예시: Yes, learning a new language is difficult because you have to remember many new words and grammar rules, which can be challenging for most people.

제안: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid unnecessary words like 'Sir' in this context. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your reasons.

예시: Yes, I definitely plan to learn other languages in the future to communicate better with people from different countries and to expand my business opportunities.

제안: Your answer repeats 'because' and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to combine sentences using linking words and be more concise and natural.

예시: I learn English because it is an important global language spoken in many countries, making it essential for communication and opportunities worldwide.

× I am an Indian person so my first language is Hindi and I can also speak English.

✓ I am an Indian, so my first language is Hindi and I can also speak English.

The phrase 'I am an Indian person' is redundant; 'I am an Indian' is more natural and grammatically correct in English.

× Yes, it is very difficult to learn a new language because there are so many new words that you have here first time.

✓ Yes, it is very difficult to learn a new language because there are so many new words that you encounter for the first time.

The phrase 'you have here first time' is incorrect; 'you encounter for the first time' correctly expresses experiencing new words.

× So that it is a challenge to learn a new language for a for a people.

✓ So, it is a challenge to learn a new language for people.

The phrase 'for a for a people' is incorrect and redundant; 'for people' is the correct form.

× I think that I learn other language in my future to communicate with the people, so for their country and to it is also can be possible for my business in that country.

✓ I think that I will learn other languages in the future to communicate with people from their countries, and it can also be possible for my business in those countries.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'learn' instead of future tense 'will learn'; also, plural forms and sentence structure needed correction for clarity.

× I learn English because it is very important for us here to speak in English because English is a major language.

✓ I learn English because it is very important for us here to speak English since English is a major language.

The phrase 'to speak in English' is incorrect; 'to speak English' is the correct form. Also, 'since' is better than repeating 'because'.

× It is spoken in every country so that it is become the most popular language in the world.

✓ It is spoken in many countries, so it has become the most popular language in the world.

The phrase 'so that it is become' is incorrect; 'so it has become' correctly uses present perfect tense to indicate a change over time.