Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating the languages you speak, then add a brief reason for wanting to learn others. Use correct verb forms and simpler, accurate vocabulary (e.g. "sound" not "sounds", "languages" not "language"). Avoid redundancy.

예시: I speak Turkish and English. I would also like to learn Italian and Spanish because I enjoy their sounds and they are useful for travel and culture.

제안: Give a clear reasoned answer with correct collocations and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words to organise points (for example "because", "however"). Replace vague or incorrect expressions (e.g. "white backup range") with concrete ideas like "vocabulary range" or "cultural nuances". Keep to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I think it can be difficult because you must learn new grammar and a wide vocabulary, which takes time. However, regular practice and speaking with native speakers makes it easier.

제안: Use a single, direct sentence for your intention then add a brief reason. Avoid mixing tenses and pronouns ("I hope I am planning" is awkward). Use linking words like "and" or "because" for clarity.

예시: Yes, I plan to learn Spanish in the near future because it is useful for travel and work, and afterwards I would like to learn Italian because the two languages are quite similar.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use accurate vocabulary and grammar. Replace incorrect phrases like "all words speaks English" with "English is widely used" and avoid absolute statements. Provide one or two specific reasons (jobs, study, travel) and link them logically.

예시: I learn English because it is widely used in business and education, so knowing it increases job and study opportunities. It also makes travelling and communicating with people from other countries much easier.

× I can speak Turkish and English, however I would like to talk more language of course and especially Italian and Spanish because those languages are sounds very good and very linguistic.

✓ I can speak Turkish and English; however, I would like to learn more languages, especially Italian and Spanish, because those languages sound very good and are very expressive.

The sentence misuses conjunctions and connectors and contains multiple grammatical issues: 'however' needs proper punctuation and placement (use semicolon or period before it and a comma after); 'talk more language' is incorrect—use 'learn more languages'; 'those languages are sounds' mixes verb forms—use 'sound' to agree with plural subject; 'very linguistic' is awkward—use 'very expressive' or another appropriate adjective. Suggestion: break long sentences into clearer parts, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct verbs for actions (learn vs talk).

× Yes, I think it's very difficult because you need to adapt yourself to new linguistic system and it takes very long time of course.

✓ Yes, I think it's very difficult because you need to adapt yourself to a new linguistic system, and it takes a very long time, of course.

Missing articles: 'new linguistic system' requires the article 'a' and 'very long time' needs 'a'. Also add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: include appropriate indefinite articles before singular countable nouns and punctuate compound sentences clearly.

× And learning a new language is very big thing because you know the language are very, very white backup range and very deep meanings.

✓ Learning a new language is a big undertaking because languages have a wide range of meanings and deep significance.

Phrases like 'very big thing' and 'white backup range' are incorrect or unclear. Use noun 'undertaking' or 'challenge' instead of 'thing'. 'the language are' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong article; use plural 'languages have'. 'white backup range' seems intended as 'wide range'. Suggestion: choose precise vocabulary and ensure subject-verb agreement when switching between singular and plural.

× I hope I am planning to learn Spanish in the future.

✓ I hope to learn Spanish in the future, or I am planning to learn Spanish in the future.

Combining 'I hope' and 'I am planning' with 'I' twice is awkward and ungrammatical. Use either 'I hope to...' or 'I am planning to...'. Suggestion: choose a single verb structure to express intention and keep tense consistency.

× If I learn Spanish, probably I will like to learn Italian because they are very similar with each other.

✓ If I learn Spanish, I will probably want to learn Italian because they are very similar to each other.

Placement of adverb 'probably' is awkward; better before main verb. 'will like to learn' is acceptable but 'will want to learn' is more natural. 'similar with each other' is incorrect preposition use: use 'similar to each other'. Suggestion: position adverbs before main verbs and use 'similar to' for comparisons.

× If you learn Spanish, Italian will be easier for sure.

✓ If you learn Spanish, Italian will certainly be easier.

'for sure' is informal; 'certainly' is more appropriate in this context. No pronoun error beyond register. Suggestion: prefer more formal adverbs in test settings.

× Because all words speaks English and English is main language of the word right now.

✓ Because most words are in English and English is the main language of the world right now.

'all words speaks English' has subject-verb agreement error and incorrect idea—use 'most words are in English'. 'English is main language of the word' has article omission and a typo 'word' should be 'world'; add 'the' before 'main language'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct articles; choose accurate expressions.

× And if you don't know English, the job opportunities and life changes will decrease for sure as a chance.

✓ If you don't know English, job opportunities and prospects for life will certainly decrease.

Phrase 'life changes will decrease for sure as a chance' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'the job opportunities' should be 'job opportunities' or 'your job opportunities'; 'life changes' is vague—use 'prospects for life' or 'opportunities in life'. 'for sure' is informal; use 'certainly'. Suggestion: rephrase to be concise and precise, match nouns to intended meaning, and avoid literal translations.

× That's why you need to learn English.

✓ That is why you need to learn English.

Contraction 'That's' is acceptable colloquially, but in formal test responses 'That is why' is clearer. No major grammar error; suggestion: use full forms in formal speech and ensure preceding sentences are corrected so this concluding sentence follows logically.