Language— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答缺乏简洁性和语法准确性。句子中有重复（“speak Mandarin… always speak”），时态和词序有误（应为“spoke”或“have spoken”），并且末尾“up to my girls”意思不明确。建议：用一到两句直接回答（话题句），接着用一两个具体细节支持。注意主谓一致和时态，避免重复。

예시: I am a native Chinese speaker and I speak Mandarin fluently. I grew up speaking Mandarin at home, so it is the language I use with my family every day.

제안: 回答表达意图清楚，但语句有重复（“I think it it”），用词稍笼统（“make some great effort”）。建议：使用连接词使句子更流畅，给出具体原因或例子来支持观点，控制在最多五句。

예시: Yes, I think learning a new language is challenging because of grammar and pronunciation differences. However, if you are highly motivated and practice regularly, you can make steady progress, for example by taking lessons and speaking with native speakers.

제안: 回答含义明确但有语法和词汇错误（复数形式、重复单词“to to”，时态不一致）。建议：先用一句话直接回答，再用具体计划说明如何学习，使用正确的语法和连词。

예시: Yes, I plan to learn other languages in the future, especially English and maybe French. To achieve this, I have made a study plan that includes daily lessons, online courses, and regular conversation practice.

제안: 内容有矛盾和错误（说英语是“my native”不合逻辑），表达笼统且缺乏具体细节。建议：直接给出一到两个清晰理由，并用具体细节解释原因，修正错误表述。避免说法不准确。

예시: I study English mainly because it is widely used internationally and helps with work and travel. For example, knowing English makes it easier to read research, communicate with colleagues from other countries, and travel abroad.

× As a Chinese native speaker, I can speak Mandarin fluently because when I grew up I always speak Mandarin up to my girls so.

✓ As a Chinese native speaker, I can speak Mandarin fluently because when I grew up I always spoke Mandarin to my girls.

句中原本用的是現在式“speak”，但說明過去習慣時應使用過去式或過去習慣用法（always spoke）。此外，介詞搭配應為“speak to someone”而非“speak up to”。建議：描述過去的習慣時使用過去式（例如：always spoke / used to speak）。

× Of course I think it it is difficult to learn a new language for everyone, but I think if you have strong interest in it, you can make some great effort to do it.

✓ Of course I think it is difficult for everyone to learn a new language, but if you have a strong interest in it, you can make a great effort to do so.

句子中語序和冠詞使用不當；重複的“it it”是筆誤。應把“difficult to learn a new language for everyone”改為更自然的“difficult for everyone to learn a new language”。另外用法搭配為“have a strong interest”而非“have strong interest”，以及固定表達“make a great effort”並用“do so”替代冗長的“do it”。建議：注意主句從句語序、冠詞 a 的使用與常用搭配。

× I am going to learn other language in the future such as French or English, but I'm more interested in English, so to achieve this I usually make the plans to to do it.

✓ I am going to learn other languages in the future such as French or English, but I'm more interested in English, so to achieve this I usually make plans to do so.

原句中“other language”應為複數“other languages”以表示不止一種，這屬於數量/單複數問題也影響未來計劃表述。此外“make the plans”不如“make plans”自然；重複“to to”為筆誤；用“do so”更簡潔。建議：表達未來多種語言時使用複數，並使用常用搭配“make plans to do so”。

× There are various reasons why I study English. The first one and the most important thing is that English is very popular language in the world, so everyone wants to learn it. In addition, English is my native.

✓ There are various reasons why I study English. The first and most important reason is that English is a very popular language in the world, so many people want to learn it. In addition, English is my native language.

原句中用詞和詞序不自然：應用“the first and most important reason”而不是“the first one and the most important thing”；“very popular language”缺少不定冠詞“a”；“everyone wants to learn it”範圍過大，改為“many people”更貼切（但不一定必須）。最後“English is my native”缺少名詞“language”。建議：注意固定搭配（first and most important reason）、冠詞使用（a very popular language）、以及補全詞語（native language）。