Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

예시: I usually organize a party and invite my friends to play with me. We buy a birthday cake or sometimes cupcakes to share. We also play many games together on that day.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và từ vựng chính xác hơn, tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa như "glass" thay vì "class". Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: When I was young, I used to celebrate my birthday at school so that all my classmates could join. We shared candies and cakes together. It was the best day of my childhood, and I loved it very much.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "Set pretty a birthday". Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I think celebrating my birthday is very important because it is not only the day I was born but also a great opportunity to spend time with my friends and family.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: To be honest, I don't know much about Chinese culture, but I think the birthdays of national leaders are the most important because they play a crucial role in the country's development and people's well-being.

× I usually organize is more party, inviting my friends to come playing with me.

✓ I usually organize a party, inviting my friends to come and play with me.

The phrase 'is more party' is incorrect; 'a party' is the correct singular form. Also, 'come playing' should be 'come and play' to express purpose correctly.

× We usually buy a birthday cake or sometimes some cupcake, some cupcakes to eat together and we also play a lot of games on that day.

✓ We usually buy a birthday cake or sometimes some cupcakes to eat together, and we also play a lot of games on that day.

The phrase 'some cupcake' is incorrect; 'some cupcakes' is the correct plural form to match the context.

× When I was young, I I used to celebrate my birthday at glass so that all my classmates could join us and we used the leashes, candies and cakes and left together.

✓ When I was young, I used to celebrate my birthday at school so that all my classmates could join us, and we used the leashes, candies, and cakes and ate together.

The word 'glass' is likely a typo for 'school'. Also, 'left together' is incorrect; the past tense of 'eat' is 'ate'. The sentence needs correction for clarity and correct past tense usage.

× It was the best day of in my childhood.

✓ It was the best day of my childhood.

The phrase 'of in my childhood' is incorrect; only one preposition 'of' is needed here.

× I love them or.

✓ I loved it.

The phrase 'I love them or' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correct expression is 'I loved it' referring to the birthday celebrations.

× Set pretty a birthday is really important for me on the grounds that it is not just today wish I was born, but also the great opportunity for me to play with my friends and families.

✓ A birthday is really important to me because it is not just the day I was born, but also a great opportunity for me to play with my friends and family.

The phrase 'Set pretty a birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'A birthday'. 'Today wish I was born' should be 'the day I was born'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family.

× To be honest, I'm not really knowledgeable about Chinese culture, but I think that the leaders countries one is the most important because he or she is the most crucial part of the countries, contributing to people's wealth a lot.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really knowledgeable about Chinese culture, but I think that the country's leader is the most important because he or she is the most crucial part of the country, contributing a lot to people's wealth.

The phrase 'leaders countries one' is incorrect; it should be 'country's leader'. Also, 'countries' should be singular 'country' to match the context.