Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答自然且表达了感情，但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容，比如描述晚餐的具体活动或食物。

예시: On my birthday, I usually have a big dinner with my family, where we enjoy traditional dishes like roast chicken and homemade cake, which makes me feel very warm and happy.

제안: 回答简洁且内容具体，可以通过添加连接词使句子更连贯，例如说明游戏的种类或派对的氛围。

예시: When I was a kid, I invited my classmates to my home for a party, and we played games like musical chairs and hide-and-seek, which made the day very enjoyable.

제안: 你的回答表达了观点且有理由支持，但可以使用连接词使表达更流畅，并稍微扩展个人成长的内容。

예시: To be honest, I don't think celebrating my birthday is very important because I prefer to focus on my personal growth, such as learning new skills and setting goals. Last year, I even forgot it, so it felt like a normal day.

제안: 回答内容具体且有文化背景支持，建议注意时态一致性，并使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: In China, grandparents' birthdays are very important because we deeply respect the elderly. For example, many families hold big parties when grandparents reach 60 or 80 years old, as these ages are considered milestones in Chinese culture.

× In China, grandparents birthdays are very important because we deeply respect the elderly.

✓ In China, grandparents' birthdays are very important because we deeply respect the elderly.

这里缺少了所有格的撇号，表示“祖父母的生日”，应在grandparents后加撇号。

× For example, many families held big parties when grandparents reach 60 or 80 years old because a certain age like a milestone in Chinese culture.

✓ For example, many families held big parties when grandparents reached 60 or 80 years old because a certain age is like a milestone in Chinese culture.

句中时态不一致，前半句用过去时held，后半句reach应改为过去式reached；此外，because后面缺少系动词is，需补充。