Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在时态错误和语法不准确，如“brought”应为“bring”，句子结构较为混乱，建议注意时态一致性和句子连贯性，同时避免重复和冗长。

예시: I usually go to school on my birthday since it falls on a weekday. After class, I bring a cake to share with my friends and family. Sometimes, if we have spare time, I go to the movies with my parents or classmates.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如“come back”应为“came back”，且“pay”用词不当，句子表达不够清晰，建议加强时态掌握和词汇准确性，句子结构应更自然。

예시: When I was young, I came back from school and helped my parents prepare dinner. Then, I met my friends and invited them to my home. We ate cake and celebrated my birthday together.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子连接略显生硬，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意介词搭配，如“take responsibility for myself”。

예시: Yes, I think a birthday party reminds me that I have grown up and it is time to take responsibility for myself. Moreover, it is a good reason to relax from busy studies.

제안: 回答内容完整，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，建议分句表达并使用连接词提高连贯性，同时注意所有格形式，如“parents' birthday”。

예시: In China, I think parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate. This is because our parents do a lot for us, and they often forget their own birthdays. Therefore, children should remember and celebrate their parents' birthdays for them.

× My birthday is always on weekdays so I go to school and after class I often brought a cake and share with my friends or family and sometimes if they if there is spare time I often go to movies with my parents or also or classmates.

✓ My birthday is always on weekdays so I go to school and after class I often bring a cake and share it with my friends or family and sometimes if there is spare time I often go to movies with my parents or classmates.

句中使用了过去式 'brought'，但句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'bring'。此外，'share' 后应加宾语 'it'，使句子完整。'if they if there is spare time' 中多余的 'they if' 应删除，保持句子通顺。

× When I was young, I come back from school and help my parents to make the dinner and then I pay. I meet my friends and invite them to my home. Then we eat cakes and celebrate my birthday together.

✓ When I was young, I came back from school and helped my parents to make dinner and then I played. I met my friends and invited them to my home. Then we ate cake and celebrated my birthday together.

句子描述过去的动作，应使用过去时态。'come' 应改为 'came'，'help' 改为 'helped'，'pay' 可能为拼写错误，应为 'play'，改为 'played'。'meet' 改为 'met'，'invite' 改为 'invited'，'eat' 改为 'ate'，'celebrate' 改为 'celebrated'。此外，'make the dinner' 中 'the' 可省略，改为 'make dinner'。

× Yes, I think a birthday party reminds me that I grew up and it is time to take responsibility to myself and it also a good reason for me to relax from the busy studies.

✓ Yes, I think a birthday party reminds me that I have grown up and it is time to take responsibility for myself and it is also a good reason for me to relax from the busy studies.

'take responsibility to myself' 中介词应为 'for'，正确表达为 'take responsibility for myself'。另外，'I grew up' 应用现在完成时 'I have grown up'，表示从过去到现在的状态变化。

× In China I think parents birthday is the most important to celebrate because our parents do a lot for us and they often forget their birthday and children should remember their birthday and celebrate it for them.

✓ In China I think parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate because our parents do a lot for us and they often forget their birthdays and children should remember their birthdays and celebrate them for them.

'parents birthday' 应为复数所有格 'parents' birthdays'，表示多个父母的生日。'is' 应改为复数 'are'，与复数主语一致。'birthday' 多处应改为复数 'birthdays'，'celebrate it' 中 'it' 应改为复数 'them'，与复数名词保持一致。