Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但可以适当简化句子，避免过长的句子，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: On my birthday, I usually spend time with my family and close friends. We enjoy a nice dinner together and then eat birthday cake while singing traditional songs.

제안: 句子结构不够完整，时态和语法错误较多。建议注意时态一致性，使用完整句子，并增加细节使回答更具体。

예시: When I was young, my parents were often busy, so I couldn't spend much time with them. I usually bought a small cake for myself to celebrate.

제안: 回答非常好，内容具体且有例子支持。可以尝试使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Definitely, my birthday is a special occasion because it allows me to spend quality time with family and friends. For instance, we often have a small party or go out for dinner, which helps strengthen our relationships.

제안: 回答表达了感情，但有语法错误（如时态和介词使用）。建议注意时态一致性和词汇准确性。

예시: I think my mother's birthday is the most important to celebrate in China because she has always supported and helped me throughout my life. Celebrating her birthday shows my gratitude and love for everything she has done for me.

× Well, in my childhood, my parents always busy so I can't spend time with them.

✓ Well, in my childhood, my parents were always busy so I couldn't spend time with them.

句中描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'always busy'缺少动词，正确表达应为'were always busy'。此外，'can't'应改为过去时态'couldn't'以保持时态一致。

× I always buy a little cake for myself.

✓ I always bought a little cake for myself.

描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态，'buy'应改为'bought'。