Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答过于简短且没有实质内容，建议在回答时直接表达你的生日习惯，并适当添加细节，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: On my birthday, I usually celebrate with my family by having a nice dinner together and sometimes go out to watch a movie.

제안: 你的回答缺乏内容，建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节，比如描述小时候的生日活动，这样能使回答更丰富。

예시: When I was young, I often had birthday parties with my friends, where we played games and ate cake.

제안: 你的回答没有表达任何观点，建议明确表达你对庆祝生日重要性的看法，并给出理由或例子。

예시: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it allows me to reflect on the past year and spend quality time with loved ones.

제안: 你的回答较为完整，表达了观点并给出了理由，但语言稍显简单，建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is the 18th birthday because it marks the transition into adulthood, symbolizing new responsibilities and freedoms.

× I think the birthday of teenager who becomes 18 years old is the most important in China because it means that they become an adult and should take responsibility.

✓ I think the birthday of teenagers who become 18 years old is the most important in China because it means that they become adults and should take responsibility.

这里的主语是复数含义，指多个青少年，所以“teenager”和“adult”应使用复数形式“teenagers”和“adults”，以保持主谓一致。

× I think the birthday of teenager who becomes 18 years old is the most important in China because it means that they become an adult and should take responsibility.

✓ I think the birthday of teenagers who become 18 years old is the most important in China because it means that they become adults and should take responsibility.

“who becomes”中的动词应与先行词“teenagers”保持一致，使用复数形式“become”，而不是单数“becomes”。