Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达，比如“close friends and or family”可以简化为“close friends or family”。此外，可以增加一些具体细节使回答更丰富。

예시: I usually keep my birthday simple by having a nice dinner with close friends or family. I prefer intimate gatherings over big parties because I value quality time with loved ones.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，影响理解。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免重复和不连贯的表达，同时增加具体细节。

예시: When I was young, I invited friends over and pretended I just wanted company, but honestly, I was excitedly waiting by the door for gifts. Although I tried to hide it, I remember feeling very happy when they arrived.

제안: 回答中有许多拼写和表达错误，且用词不当，导致意思不清晰。建议使用简单明了的语言表达观点，并避免使用不恰当的比喻。

예시: I don't think celebrating birthdays is very important. Nowadays, many people just post selfies and wait for likes on social media, which makes the celebration feel less genuine.

제안: 回答表达了情感，但存在语法错误和用词不准确的问题。建议注意主谓一致和时态，同时可以用更丰富的词汇表达感情。

예시: Definitely my mother's birthday is the most important to celebrate. She cared for me during pregnancy, endured my teenage attitude, and still cooks for me even when I say I'm not hungry. Celebrating her birthday shows respect and love.

× I usually keep it simple, perhaps a nice dinner with close friends and or family.

✓ I usually keep it simple, perhaps a nice dinner with close friends and/or family.

这里的“and or”应写作“and/or”，表示“和/或”，是一个固定表达，表示两者之一或两者都可以。

× When I was a little I did invite friends over and act like I just wanted to company but let let be honest I sat near the door waiting for the gifts to arrive if someone showed up.

✓ When I was little, I did invite friends over and acted like I just wanted company, but let's be honest, I sat near the door waiting for the gifts to arrive if someone showed up.

“When I was a little”应为“When I was little”，省略了“a”。“act”应改为过去式“acted”，因为描述过去的动作。“let let be honest”应为“let's be honest”，是固定表达。

× The anti handed I did smell but my heart took notes.

✓ The auntie handed me a smell, but my heart took notes.

原句语法混乱，推测想表达“阿姨递给我闻的东西”，应使用正确的代词“me”，并调整句子结构。

× Not really, people nowadays treat birthdays like PR cabbages, posting knife filter selfie with the option so grateful and then refreshing WeChat every 5 seconds to counter likes.

✓ Not really, people nowadays treat birthdays like PR campaigns, posting filtered selfies with captions like 'so grateful' and then refreshing WeChat every 5 seconds to count likes.

“PR cabbages”应为“PR campaigns”，是固定搭配。“knife filter selfie”应为“filtered selfies”，修正词汇错误。

× Definitely mom. She care you for nine months, survived your teenager attitude and still cooks when you say you're not hungry.

✓ Definitely mom. She cared for you for nine months, survived your teenage attitude and still cooks when you say you're not hungry.

“She care you”应为“She cared for you”，动词需用过去式且搭配介词“for”。“teenager attitude”应为“teenage attitude”，形容词形式。