Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“like”应为“likes”，以及表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: I usually have a big meal with my family on my birthday. After that, we eat cake together and make wishes. I prefer a simple and warm celebration rather than a grand party.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整，如“different thing”应为“difference”，句尾不完整。建议注意时态一致，句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Actually, I celebrated my birthday the same way when I was young. The main difference was that I was very excited and spent the whole day sharing my joy with classmates.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“importance doesn't mean”不完整，句子结构混乱。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并注意主谓一致。

예시: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important. However, having a special and meaningful celebration matters more than a big party.

제안: 回答语法错误严重，句子结构混乱，表达不清楚。建议先明确观点，再用完整句子表达，并使用连接词使句子通顺。

예시: I think the birthdays of people who have greatly contributed to the country, whether celebrities or ordinary people, are the most important to celebrate in China.

× I'm not a person who like to be lively, so usually on my birthday I have a big meal with my family and after go home we eat cake together and make wishes.

✓ I'm not a person who likes to be lively, so usually on my birthday I have a big meal with my family and after going home we eat cake together and make wishes.

这里的主语是单数的"a person"，所以谓语动词"like"应改为第三人称单数形式"likes"。

× I'm not a person who like to be lively, so usually on my birthday I have a big meal with my family and after go home we eat cake together and make wishes.

✓ I'm not a person who likes to be lively, so usually on my birthday I have a big meal with my family and after going home we eat cake together and make wishes.

"after"后面应接动名词形式，表示动作的先后顺序，因此"go"应改为"going"。

× In fact, I celebrate my birthday the same way I do now.

✓ In fact, I celebrated my birthday the same way I do now.

句子描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态，"celebrate"应改为"celebrated"。

× The only different thing is that when I was a kid I was very excited and spent whole day sharing the joy of being a birthday girl with my classmates and.

✓ The only different thing is that when I was a kid I was very excited and spent the whole day sharing the joy of being a birthday girl with my classmates.

"whole day"前应加定冠词"the"，表示特指的一整天。

× The only different thing is that when I was a kid I was very excited and spent whole day sharing the joy of being a birthday girl with my classmates and.

✓ The only different thing is that when I was a kid I was very excited and spent the whole day sharing the joy of being a birthday girl with my classmates.

句子末尾多余的"and"导致结构不完整，应删除。

× Yes, but I think importance doesn't mean.

✓ Yes, but I think importance doesn't matter.

"importance doesn't mean"表达不完整，缺少谓语动词，改为"importance doesn't matter"更符合表达。

× A grand ceremony or big party do something special, memorable and meaningful is more important on birthday.

✓ A grand ceremony or big party is not necessary; doing something special, memorable and meaningful is more important on a birthday.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语，且主谓不一致。改为两个分句，表达更清晰。

× I think whether the celebrities or common people who greatly contribute to the country than their birthday will be more important.

✓ I think whether celebrities or common people who greatly contribute to the country, their birthdays are more important.

句子结构不完整且用词不当，"than"用错，应改为逗号连接，且"birthday"应为复数"birthdays"。