Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があり、より自然で効果的な英語に改善できます。例えば、"which is sushi"の部分は不自然で、"which is"を省くか、"I usually have sushi for a special dinner because I have loved it for a long time"のように言い換えると良いでしょう。また、"we go to the there"は誤りで、"we go there"が正しいです。

예시: I usually have a special dinner on my birthday, and it is sushi because I have loved sushi for a long time. We always go to the same restaurant to celebrate.

제안: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、"went to the birthday dinner and with my family"は不自然で、"went to a birthday dinner with my family"が正しいです。また、"special course"は具体性に欠けるため、どんな料理かを具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: When I was a child, I went to a birthday dinner with my family, and we enjoyed eating a special course meal, such as multiple dishes including soup and dessert.

제안: 回答は意見を述べていますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。例えば、"celebrating birthday"は"celebrating birthdays"または"celebrating my birthday"が自然です。また、"helps me feel special and lift my spirit"の部分は"lifts my spirits"が正しい表現です。より自然で簡潔に表現しましょう。

예시: Yes, I think celebrating birthdays is very important because it makes me feel special and lifts my spirits, which is really wonderful.

제안: 回答は曖昧で、文法的にも誤りがあります。例えば、"China's birthday"は意味が不明瞭で、"important birthdays in China"などに言い換えると良いでしょう。また、"is looks important"は誤りで、"looks important"または"is important"が正しいです。より具体的な意見を述べることも求められます。

예시: I am not sure about important birthdays in China, but I think the birthdays of the Prime Minister or famous artists might be celebrated because they are well-known figures.

× I always go to the special dinner, which is sushi because I love sushi for a long time and we go to the there for my birthday.

✓ I always go to a special dinner, which is sushi, because I have loved sushi for a long time and we go there for my birthday.

The article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'special dinner' and 'there'. 'A' should be used before 'special dinner' as it is not a specific known event to the listener. Also, 'the there' is incorrect; 'there' does not need an article. Additionally, 'love sushi for a long time' should be in present perfect tense 'have loved sushi for a long time' to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× I always go to the special dinner, which is sushi because I love sushi for a long time and we go to the there for my birthday.

✓ I always go to a special dinner, which is sushi, because I have loved sushi for a long time and we go there for my birthday.

The phrase 'love sushi for a long time' should be in present perfect tense 'have loved sushi for a long time' to express an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

× I always go to the special dinner, which is sushi because I love sushi for a long time and we go to the there for my birthday.

✓ I always go to a special dinner, which is sushi, because I have loved sushi for a long time and we go there for my birthday.

The phrase 'go to the there' is incorrect. 'There' is an adverb indicating place and does not require a preposition 'to' before it.

× When I was a child I also went to the birthday dinner and with my family and we enjoyed eating special course.

✓ When I was a child, I also went to birthday dinners with my family and we enjoyed eating special courses.

The phrase 'birthday dinner and with my family' is awkward; 'and' should be removed to correctly connect the phrases. Also, 'special course' should be plural 'special courses' to match the context. Commas are added for clarity.

× When I was a child I also went to the birthday dinner and with my family and we enjoyed eating special course.

✓ When I was a child, I also went to birthday dinners with my family and we enjoyed eating special courses.

The preposition 'to' is correctly used with 'went to birthday dinners', but 'and with my family' is incorrect; 'with my family' should be connected without 'and'.

× When I was a child I also went to the birthday dinner and with my family and we enjoyed eating special course.

✓ When I was a child, I also went to birthday dinners with my family and we enjoyed eating special courses.

The article 'the' before 'birthday dinner' is unnecessary because it is a general statement. Also, 'special course' should be plural 'special courses' to indicate multiple dishes.

× Yes, I think that celebrating birthday is very important for humans because it helps me feel special and lift my spirit and it is so great.

✓ Yes, I think that celebrating birthdays is very important for people because it helps me feel special and lifts my spirits, and it is great.

'Celebrating birthday' should be plural 'celebrating birthdays' to generalize the concept. 'Humans' is better replaced with 'people' for naturalness. 'Lift my spirit' should be 'lifts my spirits' to agree with the singular subject 'it' and to use the common expression.

× Yes, I think that celebrating birthday is very important for humans because it helps me feel special and lift my spirit and it is so great.

✓ Yes, I think that celebrating birthdays is very important for people because it helps me feel special and lifts my spirits, and it is great.

The verb 'lift' should be 'lifts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'spirit' is commonly pluralized as 'spirits' in this expression.

× I don't know China's birthday, but maybe Prime Minister and a famous artist's birthday is looks important, but I don't know how important their birthday.

✓ I don't know about China's birthdays, but maybe the Prime Minister's and a famous artist's birthdays look important, though I don't know how important their birthdays are.

'China's birthday' is unclear; 'China's birthdays' or 'about China's birthdays' is better. 'Prime Minister and a famous artist's birthday' should be possessive for both: 'the Prime Minister's and a famous artist's birthdays'. 'Is looks important' is incorrect; it should be 'look important' to agree with plural subject. The last clause needs 'are' to complete the sentence.

× I don't know China's birthday, but maybe Prime Minister and a famous artist's birthday is looks important, but I don't know how important their birthday.

✓ I don't know about China's birthdays, but maybe the Prime Minister's and a famous artist's birthdays look important, though I don't know how important their birthdays are.

The verb phrase 'is looks' is incorrect; it should be 'look' to agree with the plural subject 'birthdays'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural to match the plural subject.