Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "Perry Kate" và "pit party". Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: On my birthday, I usually buy a cake for myself and have a small party with my close friends and family. In the past, I liked to have big parties with many friends and receive gifts from them.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: When I was young, I used to have big birthday parties with many close friends and family. I invited a lot of people because I wanted to receive many gifts.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều tiếng ừ, ngập ngừng. Hãy luyện tập nói tự tin, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Nên trả lời trực tiếp và có thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: When I was young, I enjoyed big celebrations, but now I prefer small parties with close friends where we can have meaningful conversations. I don't think it's necessary to celebrate my birthday in a big way.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy đưa ra ý kiến rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể.

예시: In China, I think the most important birthdays to celebrate are those of family members, like parents and grandparents, because family is very important in our culture.

× On my birthday, I often want to buy a Perry Kate for me and hold a small party with my close friends and families.

✓ On my birthday, I often want to buy a Perry Kate for myself and hold a small party with my close friends and family.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple family units, but the speaker likely means their own family, which is singular collective noun 'family'. Also, 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× However, in the past I used to want to hold a pit party with lots of friends and receive gift from.

✓ However, in the past I used to want to hold a big party with lots of friends and receive gifts from them.

The word 'pit' is likely a typo for 'big'. Also, 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to multiple presents. The sentence also lacks the object after 'receive gift from', so 'them' is added for clarity.

× Well, when I was young, I used to hold a big party with my lots of close friends and families.

✓ Well, when I was young, I used to hold a big party with lots of my close friends and family.

The phrase 'my lots of close friends and families' is incorrect. 'Lots of' should come before 'my close friends', and 'families' should be singular 'family' as it refers to the speaker's family unit.

× I invite lots of people to join my birthday party and I think that at first at the same I want to receive lots of gift from people.

✓ I invited lots of people to join my birthday party and I think that at first, at the same time, I wanted to receive lots of gifts from people.

The verb 'invite' should be in past tense 'invited' to match 'used to hold' and the past context. 'Want' should be 'wanted' for past tense consistency. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts'. Also, 'at the same' is incomplete and should be 'at the same time'.

× So I invited so many people.

✓ So I invited so many people.

This sentence is correct and does not contain grammar mistakes.

× Umm, it is just chills with my when my, uh, when I was young, but now I just want to hold a small party with my close friends and have a deep conversation with them during my party.

✓ Umm, it was just chilling with my friends when I was young, but now I just want to hold a small party with my close friends and have deep conversations with them during my party.

The phrase 'it is just chills with my when my' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'it was just chilling with my friends'. Also, 'have a deep conversation' should be plural 'have deep conversations' to match the context.

× Umm, I don't want to, I don't think that I have to uh, celebrate this party.

✓ Umm, I don't want to; I don't think that I have to celebrate this party.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a semicolon or period to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.

× Well, I think in China, the important part is that I think the most important to celebrate is the government in China because maybe he is the important person of this country.

✓ Well, I think in China, the important part is that the most important to celebrate is the government because maybe it is the most important entity of this country.

'The government' is singular and should be referred to as 'it' not 'he'. Also, 'important person' is incorrect for 'government' which is an institution, so 'entity' or 'institution' is better. The sentence structure is awkward and corrected for clarity.

× And I think people have to hold the but they like appreciate.

✓ And I think people have to hold celebrations to show their appreciation.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning.