Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should use correct verb forms and add more details to make your answer natural and clear. For example, say "I usually sing the birthday song and cut the cake with my family." This improves grammar and adds clarity.

예시: I usually sing the birthday song and cut the cake with my family. We also enjoy eating delicious food together.

제안: In English (Cambodia), use past tense consistently and avoid redundancy. For example, say "When I was young, I liked to play with my cousins and watch movies. Sometimes, I also sang songs and played games." This makes your answer clearer and more natural.

예시: When I was young, I liked to play with my cousins and watch movies. Sometimes, I also sang songs and played games with my family.

제안: In English (Cambodia), improve sentence structure and grammar. For example, say "I don't think it's very important, but I enjoy celebrating my birthday because I am getting older each year." This makes your answer more natural and clear.

예시: I don't think it's very important, but I enjoy celebrating my birthday because I am getting older each year and it is a special day for me.

제안: In English (Cambodia), avoid grammar mistakes and be more specific. For example, say "I think my mom's birthday is the most important to celebrate in China because celebrations there are more fun and have more activities." This improves clarity and vocabulary.

예시: I think my mom's birthday is the most important to celebrate in China because celebrations there are more fun and have many activities to enjoy.

× I usually sing birthday song and cutting the cake.

✓ I usually sing the birthday song and cut the cake.

The verb 'cutting' should be in the base form 'cut' to match the parallel structure with 'sing'. Also, 'birthday song' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific song commonly known.

× When I was young, I like to wake up and play with my cousin or family members.

✓ When I was young, I liked to wake up and play with my cousin or family members.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was young'), so the verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to maintain tense consistency.

× Sometimes I like to go and just sit and look at movies or just singing songs, playing games.

✓ Sometimes I like to go and just sit and watch movies or just sing songs and play games.

The verbs 'look at movies', 'singing songs', and 'playing games' are incorrect. 'Look at movies' should be 'watch movies' as 'watch' is the correct verb for movies. 'Singing' and 'playing' should be base forms 'sing' and 'play' to match the structure after 'like to'.

× I it's not really important but I have fun when is my birthday since I'm getting older each year.

✓ It's not really important, but I have fun when it's my birthday since I'm getting older each year.

The phrase 'I it's' is incorrect; it should be 'It's'. Also, 'when is my birthday' should be 'when it's my birthday' to form a correct clause. Commas are added for clarity.

× I think it's my mom's birthday. I want to celebrate my mom's birthday in China because in China there's is more fun and more stuff.

✓ I think it's my mom's birthday. I want to celebrate my mom's birthday in China because in China there is more fun and more things to do.

The phrase 'there's is' is incorrect; it should be 'there is'. Also, 'more stuff' is informal and vague; 'more things to do' is clearer and more appropriate.