Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'cigarette' thay vì 'celebrate', 'coral family' thay vì 'close family'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo câu trả lời không quá dài.

예시: On my birthday, I usually celebrate with my close family and friends. We often have a small party at home where we enjoy different kinds of food and a delicious cake together.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ cho câu hỏi về quá khứ, ví dụ 'I usually celebrated' thay vì 'I usually celebrate'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'quick game' và 'something a few present'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng.

예시: When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my family and close friends. We would have a small party at home with some fun games and exchange a few presents.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy tránh dùng từ không đúng hoặc không rõ nghĩa như 'IP level' hay 'separating my birthday'.

예시: I think celebrating my birthday is quite important because it gives me a special opportunity to reflect on the past year and spend time with my family and friends.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như 'product to celebrate birth' và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng.

예시: In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is usually a child's first birthday. There is a special ceremony to mark this occasion.

× On my birthday I usually cigarette with my coral family and friends.

✓ On my birthday I usually smoke cigarettes with my close family and friends.

The word 'cigarette' is a noun, but the sentence requires a verb. The correct verb is 'smoke' when referring to using cigarettes. Also, 'coral' is likely a typo for 'close'. The verb 'smoke' should be used here instead of 'cigarette'.

× We often have a small party of home where we where we enjoy different food and cake together.

✓ We often have a small party at home where we enjoy different food and cake together.

The phrase 'party of home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at home'. Also, 'where we where we' is a repetition error. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Again, I was young. I usually celebrate my birthday with my family and close friends.

✓ When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my family and close friends.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verb 'celebrate' should be in the past tense 'celebrated'. Also, 'Again, I was young' is awkward; 'When I was young' is more appropriate.

× We would have a small party at home with quick game and something a few present.

✓ We would have a small party at home with quick games and a few presents.

'Quick game' should be plural 'quick games' to match the context. 'Something a few present' is incorrect; it should be 'a few presents' to indicate some gifts.

× There's IP level, separating my birthday is quite important.

✓ In my opinion, celebrating my birthday is quite important.

'There's IP level, separating' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended phrase is probably 'In my opinion, celebrating'. Pronouns and phrases should be used correctly to convey meaning.

× It offer a special or opportunity to relax on the past year and a support family and friends.

✓ It offers a special opportunity to reflect on the past year and support family and friends.

'Offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'It'. 'Special or opportunity' is incorrect; it should be 'special opportunity'. 'Relax on the past year' is incorrect; 'reflect on the past year' is appropriate. 'A support family and friends' is incorrect; 'support family and friends' is correct.

× In China, the most important product to celebrate birth is typical the 1st birthday of a child.

✓ In China, the most important birthday to celebrate is typically the first birthday of a child.

'Product to celebrate birth' is incorrect; it should be 'birthday to celebrate'. 'Typical' is an adjective but should be the adverb 'typically' to modify the verb. '1st' should be spelled out as 'first' in formal speech.

× Now ask the. Ceremony.

✓ Now, there is a ceremony.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'there is' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.