Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复且语法不够准确，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。可以多用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: On my birthday, I usually have a birthday cake and take photos to share on WeChat. Then, I sing the birthday song with my family, and they make wishes for my happiness in the coming year.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议注意动词时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: When I was young, my grandfather would buy a big gift for me. I invited my best friends to my home to celebrate, and I was very happy. I really miss those days.

제안: 回答中出现了不相关的信息和语法错误，建议直接回答问题，避免无关内容，注意主谓一致和词汇准确性。

예시: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday. Every year, I enjoy having a birthday cake, singing the birthday song, and spending time with my family. It is always fun and meaningful.

제안: 回答思路清晰，但表达不够简洁，建议用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I have never thought about this before, but I believe that everyone's birthday is important in China. However, many people ignore birthdays because they are busy with their daily lives.

× I usually have a birthday cake to take photo and then show on the WeChat

✓ I usually have a birthday cake to take photos and then show them on WeChat

这里“take photo”应为复数形式“take photos”，因为通常拍多张照片；同时“show on the WeChat”应改为“show them on WeChat”，需要加宾语代词“them”指代照片，且“the WeChat”中“the”不需要。

× I will sing birthday song with my family and they make wishes to make sure the next year I will live better.

✓ I will sing the birthday song with my family and they will make wishes to make sure that next year I will live better.

“birthday song”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指生日歌；“they make wishes”时态应与前后保持一致，改为“they will make wishes”；“to make sure the next year”应加连接词“that”使句子更完整。

× my grandfather would buy would buy a big Buster gift for me and then I will invited my best friend to come to my home to celebrate with me and it's really happy and I really miss that days.

✓ my grandfather would buy a big Buster gift for me and then I would invite my best friend to come to my home to celebrate with me and it was really happy and I really miss those days.

“would buy would buy”重复，应删去一个；“I will invited”时态不一致，应改为“I would invite”；“it's really happy”应改为过去时“it was really happy”；“that days”应为复数“those days”。

× just like Taylor Swift, she also think birthday skill is important as her son's.

✓ just like Taylor Swift, she also thinks birthday skills are as important as her son's.

“she also think”主谓不一致，应为“she also thinks”；“birthday skill”应为复数“birthday skills”；“is important as”应为“are as important as”，比较结构需完整。

× I don't think this question before but I think there's no answer because I think everyone's birthday is important and every birthday should be celebrated in China, but a lot of people will ignore it as they are busy every day every year.

✓ I haven't thought about this question before but I think there's no answer because I think everyone's birthday is important and every birthday should be celebrated in China, but a lot of people ignore it because they are busy every day every year.

“I don't think this question before”时态错误，应为“haven't thought”；“will ignore”改为一般现在时“ignore”，表示习惯动作；“as”改为“because”更合适，表示原因。