Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复使用“usually”和“uh”，显得不够自然流畅。建议减少口头语，避免重复表达，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually celebrate my birthday with a small party involving my friends and family. Before the party, we have dinner together. Then, we cut the birthday cake, and I make a wish before eating it.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复“usually”。

예시: When I was young, I considered my birthday very important. I often went to the playground with my friends, and afterwards, my parents booked a restaurant to celebrate. It was always a special day for me.

제안: 回答结尾不完整，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰，并避免语法错误。

예시: Currently, I don't think it's important to celebrate my birthday because as I grow older, my friends and family are busy with their own lives. Therefore, celebrating has become less necessary for me.

제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显口语化，且“national days”应为“national day”。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意单复数形式。

예시: I believe the most important birthday to celebrate in China is the country's birthday, known as National Day. It is celebrated with a long holiday of about seven or eight days, and many Chinese people enjoy this special occasion.

× After the party, we usually, uh, it's a birthday cake and I will make a wish before we, uh, eat the cake.

✓ After the party, we usually, uh, have a birthday cake and I will make a wish before we, uh, eat the cake.

句中“it's a birthday cake”使用了错误的动词形式，应该用动词“have”来表达“吃蛋糕”的动作。这里需要用动词的原形或适当形式，而不是“it is”。

× When I was young, I usually uh take took my birthday as a great deal and I usually went to the play playground with my friends and after that my parents will booked a restaurant for me to celebrate my birthday and it is really important for me.

✓ When I was young, I usually took my birthday as a great deal and I usually went to the playground with my friends and after that my parents booked a restaurant for me to celebrate my birthday and it was really important for me.

句中“take took”混用，正确应为过去式“took”；“play playground”重复，正确为“playground”；“will booked”时态错误，过去时应为“booked”；“it is”应与过去时态一致，改为“it was”。这些错误涉及过去时态的使用，应保持时态一致。

× after that my parents will booked a restaurant for me to celebrate my birthday

✓ after that my parents booked a restaurant for me to celebrate my birthday

“will booked”是错误的，情态动词“will”后应接动词原形，正确用法是“booked”表示过去发生的动作。

× Well for now I don't think it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because as I grow older I've found more and more people don't have time to celebrate my birthday like my friends or my family members.

✓ Well, for now I don't think it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because as I grow older I've found more and more people don't have time to celebrate their birthdays like my friends or my family members.

句中“my birthday”应改为“their birthdays”，因为指代的是“people”的生日，需用复数和相应的代词。

× They all have their own things to do so it is necess, unnecessary for me to.

✓ They all have their own things to do so it is unnecessary for me to.

“necess, unnecessary”中“necess,”是拼写错误，应为“unnecessary”。

× So I think all of the Chinese people love the national days.

✓ So I think all of the Chinese people love the national day.

“national days”应为单数“national day”，指的是国庆节这个特定的节日。