Birthday— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What do you usually do on your birthday?
수험생
Actually, when I have a birthday, most of the time I plan, uh, my birthday party, then invite my friends, my family members and other people who makes me feel relaxed and cheerful. And, uh, I organize, as I said, a small party, then we have a lot of great fun.
시험관
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
수험생
As I said, most of the time, uh, I spent my time with my family members or with my close friends. That's why uh, I usually, uh, sing, uh, sing a song, also dance, uh, make some karaoke practice with my family members and my friends on my birthday.
시험관
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
수험생
Actually for being honest, in my opinion, uh no, because uh, it isn't important umm, to celebrate your birthday party. It depends on people. If you are with your family members or friends, uh, you can feel more relaxed and much cheerful too. It doesn't matter in my opinion.
시험관
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
수험생
In my opinion for being honest, as I said, it changed. It depends on the family, people's minds. But if I have to celebrate once, I would say my mother because she's my everything in the world and she did her best for me. She makes me feel umm, cheerful.
평가
총점
Part 1
What do you usually do on your birthday?
점수: 70.0제안: Cavabınızda "uh" kimi sözləri azaltmaq və cümlələri daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün çalışın. Həmçinin, cavabınızı daha qısa və konkret saxlayın, məsələn, təkrar ifadələrdən qaçın. Məsələn, "I usually plan a small birthday party and invite close friends and family to celebrate together."
예시: I usually plan a small birthday party and invite close friends and family to celebrate together. We enjoy good food and have fun playing games, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.
What did you do on your birthday when you were young?
점수: 65.0제안: Cümlələrinizdə çoxlu "uh" və təkrarlar var, bu da cavabınızın təbii və axıcı olmasına mane olur. Daha qısa və konkret ifadələr istifadə edin və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin.
예시: When I was young, I usually spent my birthday with family and close friends. We sang songs, danced, and enjoyed karaoke together, which made the celebration lively and fun.
Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?
점수: 60.0제안: Cavabınızda fikrinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin, "uh" və "umm" kimi sözləri azaltmağa çalışın. Əlavə olaraq, fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəbləri daha aydın və əlaqəli şəkildə təqdim edin.
예시: Honestly, I don't think celebrating birthdays is very important. It depends on the person, but spending time with family and friends is what really makes me feel happy and relaxed.
Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?
점수: 70.0제안: Cavabınızı daha qısa və konkret edin, "for being honest" və "as I said" kimi ifadələri azaltın. Həmçinin, fikrinizi dəstəkləyən səbəbləri daha aydın və əlaqəli şəkildə təqdim edin.
예시: I believe the most important birthday to celebrate is my mother's because she means a lot to me and has always supported me. Celebrating her birthday makes me feel happy and grateful.
문법
× ...other people who makes me feel relaxed and cheerful.
✓ ...other people who make me feel relaxed and cheerful.
The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'people', which is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.
× ...she did her best for me.
✓ ...she has done her best for me.
Since the context is about a general statement about the mother's efforts, the present perfect 'has done' is more appropriate than simple past 'did' to indicate ongoing relevance.
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