Relax— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct verb tenses and prepositions to make your answer more natural. Also, avoid using informal words like 'Nah' in formal tests. For example, say 'Recently, I have been going to the swimming pool to relax.'

예시: Recently, I have been going to the swimming pool to relax because I find swimming very refreshing and it helps me reduce stress.

제안: Make sure to use the correct verbs and vocabulary. 'Lose' is incorrect here. Use 'relax' or 'spend time' instead. Also, add linking words to clarify your answer. For example, 'I usually relax with my husband, and sometimes I spend time with my children.'

예시: I usually relax with my husband because we enjoy watching movies together, and sometimes I spend time with my children when they are free.

제안: Use correct verb forms and add more detail to support your opinion. For example, say 'Yes, I think listening to music is relaxing, especially when I listen to calm melodies after a busy day.'

예시: Yes, I think listening to music is relaxing, especially when I listen to calm melodies after a busy day, as it helps me feel peaceful and refreshed.

제안: Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And'. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. For example, 'When I want to relax, I usually watch movies or scroll through my phone.'

예시: When I want to relax, I usually watch movies or scroll through my phone because it helps me unwind and forget about stress.

× Nah, I will go in the swimming pool to relax recently.

✓ Nah, I have been going to the swimming pool to relax recently.

The sentence uses 'will go' which indicates future tense, but 'recently' refers to the past or present period. The correct tense here is present perfect continuous to express an action happening recently. Also, 'go in the swimming pool' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the swimming pool'. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar problems listed, the main issue is tense.

× Nah, I will go in the swimming pool to relax recently.

✓ Nah, I will go to the swimming pool to relax recently.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate going to a place is 'to'. So, 'go in the swimming pool' should be 'go to the swimming pool'.

× I usually lose with my husband and sometimes my children.

✓ I usually lose with my husband and sometimes with my children.

The sentence is unclear because 'lose' is likely a wrong verb choice and the preposition 'with' is missing before 'my children'. However, focusing on pronouns, the sentence lacks parallel structure with 'with'. Adding 'with' before 'my children' improves clarity and correctness.

× I usually lose with my husband and sometimes my children.

✓ I usually relax with my husband and sometimes with my children.

The verb 'lose' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'relax'. Correcting the verb improves the sentence meaning and pronoun usage remains consistent.

× Yes, I think listening music is relaxing sometimes.

✓ Yes, I think listening to music is relaxing sometimes.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. So, 'listening music' should be 'listening to music'.

× And when I was relaxed I watched mobile phone with Scroll down and watching movie.

✓ When I am relaxed, I watch videos on my mobile phone by scrolling down and watching movies.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect tense ('was relaxed' should be 'am relaxed' to match habitual action), incorrect phrase 'watched mobile phone' (should be 'watch videos on my mobile phone'), and awkward structure. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.