Relax— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it help' nên là 'it helps'. Bạn cũng nên chia câu rõ ràng hơn và thêm liên từ để câu tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I usually go to the lake near my house because it helps me relax after school.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi như 'we are have habit is a go fishing'. Nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết hợp lý.

예시: I usually relax with my friend because we have a habit of going fishing together.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, tránh lỗi như 'A car I usually listen music to relaxing'.

예시: Yes, I think listening to music is relaxing. For example, I enjoy listening to classical music like pieces performed at the Vienna Hall and traditional Vietnamese music.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'reduce that' và nói rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích câu trả lời. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

예시: I like to go fishing because it's my favorite hobby and it helps me reduce stress after school.

× I go to the lake near my house, it help me relax after school time.

✓ I go to the lake near my house, it helps me relax after school time.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I usually go to with my friend because we are have habit is a go fishing.

✓ I usually go with my friend because we have a habit of going fishing.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'go'. The correct preposition is omitted here. Also, the phrase 'we are have habit is a go fishing' is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring to 'we have a habit of going fishing'.

× A car I usually listen music to relaxing such as a Vienna hall and some kind music Vietnam.

✓ Actually, I usually listen to relaxing music such as Viennese waltz and some kinds of Vietnamese music.

The article 'A car' is incorrect and should be removed. The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'Vienna hall' is incorrect; it should be 'Viennese waltz' or similar. Also, 'some kind music Vietnam' is incorrect; it should be 'some kinds of Vietnamese music'.

× I like to go fishing because it's my favorite and uh, I can reduce that after school time.

✓ I like to go fishing because it's my favorite, and I can relax after school time.

The phrase 'I can reduce that' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'I can relax'. Also, 'after school time' is acceptable but 'after school' is more natural. The conjunction 'and' should be preceded by a comma.