Cakes— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ "like" nhiều lần và có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy eating cakes because they are delicious and always lift my mood. Although I also enjoy chocolate and candy occasionally, cakes remain my favorite sweet treat due to their variety and texture.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về việc có các loại bánh truyền thống Trung Quốc hay không, thay vì chỉ nói về sở thích cá nhân. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp như "Late and delicious" nên được sửa lại.

예시: Yes, there are many traditional Chinese cakes such as mooncakes and rice cakes. However, I personally prefer modern cakes like ice cream cake or cheesecake because they have a lighter taste.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ "made" nên là "makes") và số nhiều của danh từ ("hobby" nên là "hobbies" nếu có nhiều sở thích). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn về quá trình làm bánh để tăng tính sinh động.

예시: Yes, I really love baking cakes because it makes me feel relaxed and allows me to be creative. I usually bake chocolate or fruit cakes during my free time, and it has become one of my favorite hobbies.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ "so too sweet", "Marvel" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sửa lại câu cho rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: When I was a child, I didn't really like eating cakes because they were too sweet. Also, I had some dental problems, so my parents often didn't allow me to eat sweets to protect my teeth.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như "Sometime" nên là "Sometimes", "which both tasty and healthy" nên là "which are both tasty and healthy". Bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Of course, I like to have some desserts after meals because they help me feel refreshed. My family often eats fruits or sweet cakes after dinner. Sometimes, we also enjoy yogurt, which is both tasty and healthy.

× I don't really enjoy traditional Chinese cake because I find them very sweet and make me feel bored.

✓ I don't really enjoy traditional Chinese cakes because I find them very sweet and they make me feel bored.

The word 'cake' should be plural 'cakes' to agree with the plural pronoun 'them'. Also, 'make me feel bored' needs the subject 'they' to be clear.

× I prefer modern cake like ice cream cake or cheesecake because they have a lighter taste to it.

✓ I prefer modern cakes like ice cream cake or cheesecake because they have a lighter taste.

'Cake' should be plural 'cakes' to match the plural examples given. Also, 'taste to it' is incorrect; 'taste' alone is sufficient.

× Late and delicious.

✓ They are light and delicious.

The original phrase is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence describing the cakes.

× I really love baking cake because it made me feel relaxed and be creative.

✓ I really love baking cakes because it makes me feel relaxed and allows me to be creative.

The tense should be present to match 'I really love'. Also, 'cake' should be plural 'cakes'. 'Be creative' needs 'allows me to' for correct grammar.

× I usually bake chocolate or fruit cake during my free time or after school and it's become one of my favorite hobby.

✓ I usually bake chocolate or fruit cakes during my free time or after school and it's become one of my favorite hobbies.

'Cake' should be plural 'cakes'. 'Hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because 'one of my favorite' implies multiple hobbies.

× When I was a child I didn't really like eating cakes because they were so too sweet and also I have some tooth problems so Marvel often didn't let me in case to avoid making my teeth worse.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't really like eating cakes because they were too sweet and I also had some tooth problems, so my parents often didn't let me eat them to avoid making my teeth worse.

'Were so too sweet' is incorrect; 'too sweet' is sufficient. 'I have' should be past tense 'I had'. 'Marvel' is likely a mistake for 'my parents'. 'Didn't let me in case' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't let me eat them to avoid'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× My family often eat fruits or sweet cake after dinner.

✓ My family often eats fruit or sweet cakes after dinner.

'Family' is singular, so the verb should be 'eats'. 'Fruits' is usually uncountable as 'fruit'. 'Cake' should be plural 'cakes' to match the context.

× Sometime we also enjoy yogurt, which both tasty and healthy.

✓ Sometimes we also enjoy yogurt, which is both tasty and healthy.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. The relative clause needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct.