Coins— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết.

예시: No, I don't use coins now because they are not popular in my country. Most people prefer to use cash or mobile payments instead.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của mình.

예시: No, I think using coins is not convenient because they are easy to lose. Nowadays, many people use cash or mobile payments, which are faster and safer.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

예시: No, I didn't collect coins when I was a kid because most people used cash at that time, so collecting coins was not common.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và giải thích lý do rõ ràng.

예시: No, I don't carry coins when I go out because I usually pay digitally. Most shops accept payments through apps, so coins are unnecessary.

× Oh no I don't use coins now because I'm is in not popular in my country right now.

✓ Oh no, I don't use coins now because they are not popular in my country right now.

The phrase 'I'm is in not popular' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'they are not popular' to refer to coins in plural form. The verb 'to be' should agree with the plural subject 'coins'. Also, 'I'm' (I am) is incorrect here as the subject is coins, not the speaker.

× You should.

✓ You should use digital payments.

The sentence 'You should.' is incomplete and lacks an object. It should specify what the listener should do, such as 'You should use digital payments.' to make the sentence meaningful.

× People usually use a cash entitled scurries so is a dumb use code in my country.

✓ People usually use cash or digital currencies, so it is common to use codes in my country.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'a cash entitled scurries' is incorrect; it should be 'cash or digital currencies'. Also, 'so is a dumb use code' is incorrect; it should be 'so it is common to use codes'. Pronouns and nouns must be used correctly to convey meaning.

× Oh no, I things using crazy not convenient because I feel it's easy to lose because right now many people usually use cash or visit or payments for sample.

✓ Oh no, I think using coins is not convenient because I feel it's easy to lose them. Right now, many people usually use cash or digital payments, for example.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'I things using crazy' should be 'I think using coins'; 'visit or payments for sample' should be 'digital payments, for example'. Pronouns like 'them' are needed to refer back to 'coins'. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× Many shops are served by Paceman throughs visitor herbs or shell.

✓ Many shops accept payments through digital wallets or apps.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'Paceman', 'visitor herbs', and 'shell'. It should be corrected to 'Many shops accept payments through digital wallets or apps' to convey the intended meaning.

× Oh no, because when I swear kids, a lot of people use cash instead.

✓ Oh no, because when I was a kid, a lot of people used cash instead.

The phrase 'when I swear kids' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to match the past time frame.

× The craze is very greatly used.

✓ Cash was very widely used.

'The craze is very greatly used' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'Cash was very widely used' to correctly express the idea that cash was commonly used in the past.

× Uh, in in that time show I don't collect it cries.

✓ Uh, at that time, I didn't collect coins.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'in in that time show' and 'it cries'. It should be 'at that time, I didn't collect coins' to correctly express the past action.

× Oh no I don't carry cries when I go out because I don't have toys.

✓ Oh no, I don't carry coins when I go out because I don't have any.

'cries' should be 'coins', and 'I don't have toys' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have any' referring to coins. The sentence needs correction for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I right now I usually use AV digital to payment to buy an because many people just accept too.

✓ Right now, I usually use digital payments to buy things because many people accept them.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'AV digital to payment' and 'buy an'. It should be 'I usually use digital payments to buy things because many people accept them' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Paste a through apps or a.

✓ Payments through apps or online.

The phrase 'Paste a through apps or a' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'Payments through apps or online' to correctly express the idea.