Coins— Part 1 채점 보고서

× No, not definitely, because indeed Indischen Russian coins are definitely not useful, because coins are only ₹2 or ₹5.10 and 20 and 50.

✓ No, definitely not, because indeed Indian Russian coins are definitely not useful, because coins are only ₹2, ₹5, ₹10, ₹20, and ₹50.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and numbers, making it unclear. Correcting the quantifiers and properly listing the coin denominations improves clarity and correctness.

× So coins are not that useful for me, Yes, that is.

✓ So coins are not that useful for me, yes, that is true.

The phrase 'Yes, that is' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'true' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× It's depends on you because the our price of the items are also less and also high because the prices are so high.

✓ It depends on you because the prices of the items are sometimes low and sometimes high.

'It's depends' is incorrect; 'It depends' is correct. Also, 'the our price' is incorrect; 'the prices' is appropriate. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement.

× So the coins are not that useful to buy a things Because in India snacks and tea are about ₹50 and ₹2 ended ₹10 are not dead to convenient to buy or items.

✓ So the coins are not that useful to buy things because in India snacks and tea cost about ₹50, and ₹2 and ₹10 coins are not convenient to buy items.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and has unclear phrases like '₹2 ended ₹10' and 'not dead to convenient'. Correcting quantifiers and rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, definitely, because when I was a kid, I eat so much packets and packets are about therapies and ₹10 and coins are also not much high price.

✓ Yes, definitely, because when I was a kid, I ate so many packets, and packets cost about ₹3 and ₹10, and coins were also not very high in price.

The verb 'eat' should be in past tense 'ate' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'so much packets' should be 'so many packets' for countable nouns. 'Therapies' seems incorrect and is replaced with '₹3' as a plausible correction.

× So I uh, so many I just stopped up. I just have some bigger calling.

✓ So I, uh, collected many. I just saved some bigger coins.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing to a clearer structure improves understanding and grammatical correctness.

× It depends because when I go to a lie or snacks for me so I carry a coins because there are not much cash so I carry a coins to buy something.

✓ It depends because when I go to buy snacks, I carry coins since I don't have much cash, so I carry coins to buy something.

The phrase 'go to a lie or snacks' is incorrect. Correcting to 'go to buy snacks' and adjusting the sentence structure improves clarity and correct modal verb usage.

× Chocolates and candies and coins are useful for all so like candies and chocolates so when I go out for snacks so I can carry coins instead of notes.

✓ Chocolates, candies, and coins are useful for all. So, when I go out for snacks, I can carry coins instead of notes.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and has redundant phrases. Correcting plural forms and punctuation improves readability and grammar.