Coins— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简短，缺少细节和连贯性。建议增加具体说明数字支付的方式和原因，并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

예시: No, I don't use coins anymore because in China, digital payments like WeChat Pay and Alipay are very popular and convenient to use.

제안: 回答中出现了重复和语法错误（如“Queens”应为“coins”），表达不够清晰。建议避免重复，使用正确词汇，并提供具体原因。

예시: No, I don't find coins convenient because they are small and easy to lose, and it's often difficult to count the exact amount when paying with them.

제안: 时态使用不准确，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用过去时描述过去的经历，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I had a pig-shaped coin bank where I kept all the coins I received as pocket money.

제안: 语法错误较多，如“when I going out”应为“when I go out”，表达不够流畅。建议注意语法，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词。

예시: No, I don't carry coins when I go out because they are small and easy to lose, so I prefer to use digital payments instead.

× Right now in China we usually use a digital payment.

✓ Right now in China we usually use digital payments.

digital payment 是可数名词，表示多种数字支付方式，需用复数形式digital payments。

× Queens are tiny and they are hard to pick.

✓ Coins are tiny and they are hard to pick up.

原句中Queens应为Coins，且pick后应加up构成短语pick up，表示捡起。

× Pick it, pick it up.

✓ Pick it up.

重复使用pick it不符合英语表达习惯，应简化为pick it up。

× Yes I do. I had a collection in a little pig shape and I will put all the coins that I got as pocket money and I put there to collect them.

✓ Yes I did. I had a collection in a little pig shape and I put all the coins that I got as pocket money there to collect them.

回答过去时问题应使用did而非do；描述过去动作应使用过去时will改为put；句子中多余的and应删除。

× This is not a good option when I going out for buying stuff or something.

✓ This is not a good option when I go out to buy stuff or something.

going out应改为go out，动词原形；buying应改为to buy，不定式作目的状语。