Fishing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。同时，回答应更简洁，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, fishing is quite popular among elderly people in my country. They often go fishing in their free time because they find it relaxing and rewarding when they catch fish.

제안: 回答表达不够流畅，句子结构有些重复，且最后一句不完整。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy eating fish, especially fried fish and fish cooked in hot pot. I prefer fish varieties that have fewer bones because they are easier to eat.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且用词不当。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达感受，并注意连贯性。

예시: Yes, I have been to the fish market, but not very often. I find the strong smell and the wet floor unpleasant, and I feel uncomfortable watching the vendors kill the fish because of the blood.

제안: 回答较为自然，但最后一句表达不够清晰，建议简化并明确表达。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, fishing is popular in my country, especially among elderly people. They see it as a hobby and enjoy the sense of achievement when they catch a fish.

× Yes, I often see some elder person go fishing when they have later time to kill their time.

✓ Yes, I often see some elderly people go fishing when they have spare time to kill.

这里“some elder person”应使用复数形式“some elderly people”，因为后文用的是复数代词“they”，且表示不止一个人。

× They perceive fishing as their habit and they enjoy the achievement after get a fish.

✓ They perceive fishing as their habit and they enjoy the achievement after getting a fish.

动词“get”在这里应使用现在分词形式“getting”，因为它作为介词“after”的宾语，介词后应接动名词。

× I love eating the kinds of without much bone in the fish.

✓ I love eating kinds of fish without many bones.

“the kinds of”用法不当，应去掉“the”且“bone”应使用复数“bones”，因为鱼中通常有多块骨头。

× Yes I have, but not frequent.

✓ Yes, I have, but not frequently.

“frequent”是形容词，修饰动词应使用副词“frequently”。

× I can stand with the awful smile in the air and dirty water on the floor, and I even can't stand with the merchant kill the fish with lots of blood.

✓ I can stand the awful smell in the air and dirty water on the floor, but I can't even stand the merchants killing the fish with lots of blood.

“stand with”用法错误，应直接用“stand”加宾语；“smile”应为“smell”；“merchant kill”应改为“merchants killing”，使用动名词形式。

× They consider fishing a hobby and enjoy the achievement after catching a fish they can connect with.

✓ They consider fishing a hobby and enjoy the achievement after catching a fish they can connect with.

此句无明显语法错误，符合语法规范。