Fishing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不准确，如“middle-aged person”应为“middle-aged people”，以及句子结构可以更自然。建议注意主谓一致和冠词使用，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, fishing is quite popular in my country, especially among middle-aged people. I believe this is because fishing is a relaxing activity that helps them unwind, and it also contributes significantly to the local economy by supplying fresh seafood.

제안: 回答中表达了个人原因，但句子结构不够自然，且“fishy smile”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: No, I don't like eating fish because I'm allergic to seafood. Also, I find the smell of fish unpleasant, which makes me reluctant to try it.

제안: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达不够自然，如“fish market”前应加冠词“the”，时态使用不当。建议注意冠词使用和时态一致，避免夸张表达。

예시: Yes, I have been to the fish market several times with my mom. However, I don't like going there because of the strong fishy smell. Whenever I visit, I tend to hold my breath, which makes me feel quite uncomfortable.

제안: 回答较为自然且结构清晰，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

예시: Yes, fishing is popular in my country, especially among middle-aged people. I think this is because fishing provides a good way for them to relax and escape from daily stress, which is important for their mental health.

× Yes, fishing is popular in my country especially among middle-aged person.

✓ Yes, fishing is popular in my country especially among middle-aged people.

The word 'person' is singular, but the context requires a plural form to refer to a group. Therefore, 'people' should be used instead of 'person' to match the plural meaning.

× I think this may because fishing is a relaxing activity and it plays a significant role in the local economy by providing fresh seafood.

✓ I think this may be because fishing is a relaxing activity and it plays a significant role in the local economy by providing fresh seafood.

The sentence is missing the verb 'be' after 'may' to form the correct modal verb phrase 'may be'. Without 'be', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× No, I don't like eating fish because I'm allergic to seafood and I always think fish have a fishy smile which makes me reluctant to try it taste.

✓ No, I don't like eating fish because I'm allergic to seafood and I always think fish have a fishy smell which makes me reluctant to try its taste.

The word 'smile' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'smell'. Also, 'it taste' should be 'its taste' to correctly use the possessive pronoun referring to the taste of fish.

× Yes, I have been to fish market several times with my mom and I really don't like to go that place because of the fishy smell.

✓ Yes, I have been to the fish market several times with my mom and I really don't like to go to that place because of the fishy smell.

The phrase 'been to fish market' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'fish market'. Also, 'go that place' is missing the preposition 'to' which is necessary after 'go' when indicating a destination.

× Every time I went there I will hold my breath which makes me feel I am about to die.

✓ Every time I go there, I hold my breath which makes me feel I am about to die.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'will hold'. To express habitual action, present tense should be used consistently: 'go' and 'hold'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.