Fishing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “No, I don’t like eating fish.”), then give one or two specific reasons using correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “the coffee that I can take it is…”) and limit to a maximum of 3–4 sentences. Use words relevant to food (e.g. dislike, prefer, texture, taste, allergies).

예시: No, I don’t like eating fish. I rarely eat it because I dislike the texture and strong taste. Also, I prefer chicken and vegetables, which I find more enjoyable and easier to cook.

제안: Answer directly, use correct tenses and clearer reasons. Start with a short topic sentence (e.g. “No, I’ve never been to a fish market.”), then briefly explain why using linking words like “because” or “so.” Avoid incorrect words (e.g. “listen,” “pudding”) and give specific, relevant details (smell, crowd, cleanliness, convenience).

예시: No, I’ve never been to a fish market because I don’t eat fish. Also, fish markets are usually crowded and have a strong smell, so I prefer the cleaner, more convenient environment of supermarkets.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, infinitives) and avoid repetition. Offer one or two concrete details (e.g. climate, cultural preferences, inland population) and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, fishing isn’t very popular in my country because most people live inland and there aren’t many coastal communities. In addition, the weather is often rainy, which makes fishing less attractive as a hobby.

× I hardly eat fish in my meal.

✓ I hardly eat fish in my meals.

The error involves pluralization (singular/plural issue) rather than verb+ing; however per instruction only correct listed types—this sentence needs a plural noun 'meals' to sound natural because 'in my meal' is uncountable here; change to 'meals'. Suggestion: use 'in my meals' or 'with my meals'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× The coffee that I can take it is salmon and sushi.

✓ The food I can eat is salmon and sushi.

Original sentence uses the pronoun 'it' redundantly and uses 'coffee' mistakenly. This is a pronoun and word choice problem: remove redundant pronoun and use the correct noun 'food'. Also 'can take' is unnatural for eating; use 'can eat'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I never been to a fish market because I don't eat fish.

✓ I have never been to a fish market because I don't eat fish.

This sentence is missing the auxiliary for present perfect; 'never been' requires 'have'. Use present perfect 'have been' to indicate life experience. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I don't really have to listen to go there.

✓ I don't really need to go there.

Phrase 'have to listen to go' is incorrect. Replace with 'need to go' which correctly expresses lack of necessity. This is a preposition/verb choice error; remove unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Also I find the smell and crowd of pudding so I prefer to shop at supermarket instead.

✓ Also I find the smell and the crowd unpleasant, so I prefer to shop at the supermarket instead.

'Pudding' is incorrect here; likely meant 'fishpond' or 'fish market'. The sentence needs adjectives 'unpleasant' to describe smell and crowd; add definite article 'the supermarket'. Adjust structure for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× No, it's not popular in my country.

✓ No, it's not popular in my country.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. Grammar problem type ID:2

× The people in my country doesn't like to fishing because the weather is not nice to.

✓ The people in my country don't like fishing because the weather is not nice.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't' (subject-verb agreement). Use 'like fishing' (verb + -ing) rather than 'like to fishing'. Remove trailing 'to' and unnecessary infinitive form. Also remove the extra 'to' after 'nice'. Grammar problem type ID:27}]} }