Fishing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, trật tự từ và dùng câu trả lời trực tiếp ngắn gọn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No + lý do), tránh từ thừa như “note”, dùng thì đúng (I hate -> I really hate), và cấu trúc so sánh chính xác (meat and vegetables are fresher and healthier than fish). Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể và nối các ý bằng từ nối như “because” hoặc “so”. Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

예시: No, I don’t like eating fish. I really hate the taste because I find it bland and fishy. I prefer meat and vegetables because they taste fresher and feel healthier to me. For example, I usually choose chicken or beef for meals instead of seafood.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sửa lỗi từ vựng/diễn đạt. Bỏ những từ không cần thiết như “I mentioned Oridas” (không rõ nghĩa). Dùng thì và cấu trúc chính xác: “No, I haven’t” hoặc “No, I have never been”. Giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và nêu ví dụ cụ thể nơi bạn mua cá (supermarket, not mall). Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để liên kết ý.

예시: No, I have never been to a fish market. I don’t have them in my hometown, so when I need fish I buy it at supermarkets. For example, there is a big supermarket nearby that sells packaged fish fillets, which I find more convenient.

제안: Cải thiện trật tự câu và ngữ pháp, dùng liên từ để làm ý mạch lạc. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (“Not really” + lý do). Sửa cụm từ thành “in the countryside” và “people go to the countryside to fish”. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể (e.g. suburbs or provinces) để hỗ trợ lập luận. Giữ 2–4 câu, tránh tiếng tạm “umm”.

예시: Not really. Fishing is more common in the countryside because urban areas like Hanoi have few lakes or rivers. People from the city often travel to nearby provinces to fish at rivers or reservoirs, especially on weekends.

× Note I very hate eat fish because I think it's not delicious, I don't like anymore in the sea and I like I prefer eat meat and vegetable.

✓ Actually, I really hate eating fish because I think it is not delicious; I don't like it anymore. I prefer eating meat and vegetables.

The sentence uses incorrect adverbs and adjectives and has several structural problems. 'Very hate' is ungrammatical; use 'really hate'. 'Hate eat' should be 'hate eating' (gerund after verbs of preference). 'It's not delicious' is fine but needs proper punctuation. 'I don't like anymore in the sea' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended to say 'I don't like it anymore'. 'I like I prefer eat meat and vegetable' mixes forms and repetitions; use 'I prefer eating meat and vegetables'. To improve, use correct adverb 'really', use gerunds after verbs of preference, include pronouns when referring to things, and make nouns plural when talking generally ('vegetables').

× No, I mentioned Oridas. I really hate fish but if I want to eat fish I think I will go supermarket or shopping mall.

✓ No, I mentioned Oridas. I really hate fish, but if I want to eat fish I think I will go to a supermarket or a shopping mall.

Missing prepositions and articles and a gerund/pattern issue. 'Go supermarket' requires 'go to a supermarket'. Use articles 'a' for countable singular nouns. Also adding a comma before 'but' improves clarity. The verb forms are acceptable here, but the sentence needs correct preposition and articles. To improve, always use 'go to' with places and include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns.

× I never see fish markets in my hometown.

✓ I have never seen fish markets in my hometown.

Tense and aspect error affecting subject-verb agreement and correctness. Present perfect 'have never seen' is appropriate to describe experience up to now. 'I never see' is incorrect for this meaning. To improve, use present perfect when referring to life experiences: 'I have never seen'. 'Fish markets' plural is fine if there are multiple or general.

× Not really, I think fishing is popular in countryside because in I live in Hanoi which is city centre so umm not have many lake or rivers to fishing so people often go to countryside to fishing.

✓ Not really. I think fishing is more popular in the countryside because I live in Hanoi, which is a city center, so there are not many lakes or rivers for fishing; people often go to the countryside to fish.

Multiple present tense and noun form issues. 'In countryside' should be 'in the countryside'. 'In I live' is wrong order; use 'I live in Hanoi'. 'Which is city centre' needs articles: 'which is a city center'. 'Not have many lake or rivers' should be 'there are not many lakes or rivers'. 'To fishing' should be the infinitive 'to fish' or 'for fishing'. To improve: use correct word order, include articles 'the' and 'a' where needed, pluralize countable nouns, and use 'there are' for existence statements.