Laughing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "after creates a positive." Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly with linking words.

예시: I think laughter plays a vital role in daily life because it helps relieve stress and improves our mood. For instance, when I go out with my friends, sharing jokes makes me feel happy and creates a positive atmosphere.

제안: Your answer needs better sentence structure and grammar, especially with verb tenses. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about the event.

예시: The last time I laughed was when I won a volleyball match. I had practiced a lot, and winning made me feel very happy and proud.

제안: There are some vocabulary mistakes, such as "tell furniture" which is unclear. Also, improve grammar by using correct articles and verb forms. Provide clearer examples and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I believe I can make others laugh because I have an active and funny personality. For example, I often tell jokes to my friends, which always makes them smile. I really enjoy making people happy.

제안: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear meaning, especially "Afterwards we feel very stressful." Use correct adjectives and clarify your ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I like watching funny movies because they help me relax and feel happier. I often go to the cinema with my boyfriend to watch comedies, and afterwards we feel refreshed and less stressed.

× I have a active and funny personality.

✓ I have an active and funny personality.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'active'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× I always tell furniture to my friends and make everyone smile.

✓ I always tell jokes to my friends and make everyone smile.

The word 'furniture' is uncountable and does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely 'jokes', which is countable and appropriate here.

× I like to watch funny movie because it can help us relax and happier.

✓ I like to watch funny movies because they can help us relax and be happier.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the plural verb 'can help'. Also, 'happier' needs the verb 'be' before it to form the correct predicate.

× The last time I laughed is I win the match, it's the volleyball match.

✓ The last time I laughed was when I won the match, it was the volleyball match.

The sentence refers to a past event, so past tense verbs 'was' and 'won' should be used instead of present tense 'is' and 'win'.

× I spent many time to practice volleyball and I win the match.

✓ I spent a lot of time practicing volleyball and I won the match.

'Many time' is incorrect; 'a lot of time' is appropriate. Also, 'to practice' should be 'practicing' after 'spent'. The verb 'win' should be past tense 'won' to match the past context.

× Afterwards we feel very stressful.

✓ Afterwards we feel very stressed.

'Stressful' describes something that causes stress, while 'stressed' describes a feeling. Here, the correct adjective is 'stressed' to express how they feel.