Laughing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan agak membingungkan karena penggunaan kata-kata yang tidak tepat dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan langsung ke inti, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

예시: I think laughter is very important in daily life because it helps us feel happy and connect with others. It can relieve stress and make our day more enjoyable.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan kata seperti 'left' yang seharusnya 'laughed'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan singkat, serta jelaskan konteks dengan detail yang relevan.

예시: The last time I laughed was today at my office when my friends told some funny jokes during our break. It made me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi kalimatnya agak berulang dan kurang lancar. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: Of course, I believe adding a little humor to conversations can make people laugh. For example, today I told some jokes at work and my friends laughed a lot.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, namun kalimatnya agak panjang dan kurang terstruktur. Cobalah untuk membagi kalimat menjadi bagian yang lebih pendek dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk memperjelas pilihan Anda.

예시: Actually, I prefer watching science, historical, or romance movies. However, if a funny movie has a good cast, I will watch it and enjoy it.

× In my opinion, laughter brings some joy into our daily life because with love we can feel umm enjoyment and happiness from others to us and it just.

✓ In my opinion, laughter brings some joy into our daily life because with love we can feel umm enjoyment and happiness from others towards us and it just.

The phrase 'from others to us' is incorrect preposition usage. The correct preposition is 'towards' to indicate direction of feelings. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Umm, the last time I left is today when I was in my office in all my office hour.

✓ Umm, the last time I laughed was today when I was in my office during all my office hours.

The verb 'left' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'laughed' which is past tense of 'laugh'. Also, 'in all my office hour' should be 'during all my office hours' for correct preposition and plural form. This involves past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and singular/plural issue (ID 1).

× Uh yeah, I love with my friends because they make some jokes or and that is so funny and.

✓ Uh yeah, I laugh with my friends because they make some jokes and that is so funny.

The verb 'love' is incorrect here; it should be 'laugh'. Also, 'or and' is redundant and incorrect conjunction usage. This is a verb choice error and incorrect conjunction use (ID 16).

× or and that is so funny and.

✓ and that is so funny.

The phrase 'or and' is incorrect conjunction usage. Only one conjunction 'and' is needed to connect the ideas. This is incorrect conjunction use (ID 16).

× Of course, because I think that every moment or every conversation we can add them into a bit, a little bit of humour.

✓ Of course, because I think that every moment or every conversation we can add a bit, a little bit of humour.

The phrase 'add them into a bit' is incorrect. 'Add a bit of humour' is correct. The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and incorrect here (ID 12).

× And I just, I just did it today and they just laugh about my jokes.

✓ And I just, I just did it today and they just laughed at my jokes.

The verb 'laugh' should be in past tense 'laughed' to match the past action. Also, the correct preposition is 'at' not 'about'. This is past tense issue (ID 5) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Actually I prefer to watch a science historic movie or romance, but if there is a choice about funny movies and I see the cast in there is good looking, I will watch it and I will enjoy.

✓ Actually I prefer to watch a science historic movie or romance, but if there is a choice of funny movies and I see the cast there is good looking, I will watch it and I will enjoy it.

The phrase 'choice about funny movies' should be 'choice of funny movies'. Also, 'cast in there is good looking' should be 'cast there is good looking'. Missing 'it' at the end is needed. This is incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and sentence structure errors (ID 26).