Laughing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and coherent: begin with a clear topic sentence stating what laughter means, then give two specific supporting details with linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'means' -> 'means' with no extra words), correct word choice (e.g., 'brings happiness and good luck' instead of 'luck'), and avoid vague phrases like 'the doctor also means well-being.' Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Laughter is an important part of daily life because it brings happiness and reduces stress. For example, laughing with friends or family at celebrations like weddings or festivals creates a warm atmosphere and strengthens relationships. In addition, laughter can improve our mood and make us feel healthier.

제안: Make your answer natural and concise: state the time clearly, then add one specific detail about why you laughed using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'when'). Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences.

예시: I laugh every day, and the last time was yesterday evening when I went to the shopping mall with my parents because we saw a funny street performer. We all laughed together, and it made the evening really enjoyable.

제안: Be specific and grammatical: start with a direct answer, then give 1–2 clear examples of how you make people laugh. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'eye contact' instead of 'air contact') and clearer phrasing (e.g., 'physical gestures' or 'funny impressions'). Avoid vague phrases like 'some cultural movements.'

예시: Yes, I can usually make people laugh. For example, I often tell short jokes or do funny impressions of celebrities, and I sometimes use playful facial expressions or exaggerated gestures to make my friends laugh.

제안: Answer directly and add one specific reason with linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I like to watch' and 'animated movies' or 'an animated movie such as Zootopia'). Comment specifically on what you liked (plot, characters, animation) instead of vague praise.

예시: Yes, I like to watch funny movies, especially animated films such as Zootopia. I watched Zootopia six months ago and enjoyed its clever storyline and lively characters, as well as the witty humor that appeals to both children and adults.

× I think when you talk to someone the love can give the person a positive feedback and the doctor also means well-being.

✓ I think when you talk to someone, love can give the person positive feedback and can also mean well-being.

This sentence misuses articles and verbs and uses 'doctor' incorrectly; the intended meaning is that 'love' provides positive feedback and implies well-being. Remove 'the' before 'love' and 'a' before 'positive feedback', and change 'the doctor also means' to 'can also mean' to express possibility. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'love can give someone positive feedback and can also mean well-being.'

× Especially in some important occasions like weddings and Spring festival.

✓ This is especially true on important occasions like weddings and the Spring Festival.

The fragment lacks a clear verb linking it to the previous sentence. Adding 'This is' creates a complete sentence. Use the preposition 'on' with 'occasions' and add the article 'the' before 'Spring Festival' because it is a named event. Suggestion: Connect fragments into full sentences and use correct prepositions and articles.

× Laughter can means happy and luck.

✓ Laughter can mean happiness and good luck.

After a modal verb like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used: 'mean' not 'means'. Also 'happy' and 'luck' are the wrong word forms; use the nouns 'happiness' and 'good luck' for the intended meaning. Suggestion: After modals use base verbs and choose correct noun forms.

× To be honest, I laugh every day.

✓ To be honest, I laugh every day.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses the simple present to describe a habitual action. Keep as is.

× The last time I laugh, it was yesterday evening.

✓ The last time I laughed was yesterday evening.

When referring to a past event, use the past tense 'laughed' not the present 'laugh'. Also remove the extra comma and the unnecessary 'it' to form a natural past-time sentence. Suggestion: Use simple past for completed past actions.

× I went to the shopping mall with my parents.

✓ I went to the shopping mall with my parents.

Sentence is correct; it uses the simple past appropriately to describe a completed action in the past.

× I was very happy.

✓ I was very happy.

Sentence is correct; past tense 'was' appropriately describes the student's feeling at that past time.

× Yes, I think I'm quite a humorous person and I always tell some jokes to my friend to let them laugh.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite a humorous person and I always tell some jokes to my friends to make them laugh.

There is a number mismatch: 'some jokes' and 'my friend' should align—use plural 'friends' or singular 'a friend'. Also 'to let them laugh' is unnatural; use 'to make them laugh'. Use consistent plural pronouns 'them' with 'friends'. Suggestion: Keep number agreement between nouns and pronouns and choose natural collocations like 'make someone laugh'.

× Sometimes just some simple things like a air contact or some cultural movements can.

✓ Sometimes just simple things like eye contact or small cultural gestures can (make people laugh).

Several issues: 'a air' is wrong article and spelling; 'air contact' likely intended 'eye contact'. 'Cultural movements' is unnatural; 'cultural gestures' or 'expressions' fits better. The sentence ends incomplete with 'can'—add the object 'make people laugh' or leave implied with a parenthetical. Use base form after 'can'. Suggestion: Correct vocabulary ('eye contact'), use 'gestures', and complete the clause: 'can make people laugh'.

× Yes, I like watch funny movies, especially some animation movie like Zootopia.

✓ Yes, I like watching funny movies, especially animated films like Zootopia.

After 'like' use the gerund 'watching' not the base verb 'watch'. Use 'animated films' instead of 'animation movie' and plural 'films' or 'movies' to match 'funny movies'. Suggestion: Use 'like watching' and 'animated films'.

× I watched it six months ago.

✓ I watched it six months ago.

Sentence correctly uses the simple past with a time expression 'six months ago' to indicate a completed action.

× I think it was very interesting and the design in it was very ingenious.

✓ I think it was very interesting and its design was very ingenious.

Saying 'the design in it' is awkward; use the possessive 'its design'. The rest is acceptable. This makes the sentence more natural and concise. Suggestion: Use possessive pronouns to refer back to a film's features: 'its design'.