Road— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a complete and coherent answer by avoiding sentence fragments and explaining your reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, the roads in my area are quite busy almost all the time because it is a vibrant city with many people commuting daily.

제안: Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and explain the process or situation with linking words for clarity.

예시: Yes, people usually cross the road near traffic signals. They press a button and wait until the signal turns green before crossing safely.

제안: Focus on clear pronunciation and grammar. Provide specific details and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: The roads in my city are in excellent condition and are almost always clean because the authorities maintain them well.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and effective.

예시: No, I don't think the roads need any improvement because they are in good condition and function well for both drivers and pedestrians.

× Yes, the roads here are quite busy almost all the time because. This is a vibrant city.

✓ Yes, the roads here are quite busy almost all the time because this is a vibrant city.

The original sentence incorrectly splits a single thought into two fragments by placing a period after 'because'. This results in a sentence fragment. The correction combines the two parts into one complete sentence, properly connecting the cause and effect.

× He is near the traffic signals.

✓ People cross near the traffic signals.

The original sentence uses 'He' which is unclear and does not answer the question about people crossing the road. The correction clarifies the subject and relates directly to the question, improving sentence structure and clarity.

× There are certain patterns which you can press and wait till the. Signal shows green for the.

✓ There are certain buttons which you can press and wait until the signal shows green for you.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear, ending abruptly after 'till the.' The correction completes the sentence, clarifies the subject, and improves coherence by specifying 'buttons' and 'for you'.

× Here's the roads are perfect and there almost clean all the time and yeah, it's men did really well.

✓ The roads here are perfect and they are almost clean all the time, and yeah, it's maintained really well.

The original sentence has incorrect use of 'Here's' instead of 'The roads here', 'there' instead of 'they are', and 'men did' which is incorrect. The correction fixes singular/plural issues and replaces incorrect words to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× No, I don't think it needs any improvement because the condition is really good and it's not causing any trouble to have both the drivers and the pedestrians.

✓ No, I don't think it needs any improvement because the condition is really good and it's not causing any trouble for either the drivers or the pedestrians.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to have both the drivers and the pedestrians' which is awkward and unclear. The correction uses proper prepositions and conjunctions to clearly express that the roads are not causing trouble for both groups.