Road— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các từ vựng liên quan đến giao thông và đường phố để tăng tính tự nhiên.

예시: Yes, the roads near my home are usually very busy, especially in the mornings because many people go to the nearby market to buy breakfast. This causes a lot of traffic during rush hours.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để mô tả hành động của người dân khi qua đường.

예시: Yes, people often cross the roads on foot in my city because there are many shops and markets nearby. Pedestrian crossings are common in busy areas.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể về tình trạng đường phố và các biện pháp bảo trì.

예시: The roads in my city are generally in good condition because the local government repairs them regularly, about once a month, to handle increasing traffic.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do tại sao đường cần cải thiện và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp liên quan đến giao thông và an toàn đường bộ.

예시: Yes, I think some roads in my city need improvement because they are often congested and cause many traffic accidents. Better road design and traffic management could help.

× I because I flee near market, so it's a very PC trait.

✓ I live near the market, so it's a very busy area.

The verb 'flee' is incorrectly used instead of 'live'. 'Flee' is the past participle form meaning to run away, which does not fit the context. The correct verb is 'live' to indicate residence.

× Every morning many people go to supermarket gives my garden market to breakfast or forgettable for one day.

✓ Every morning many people go to the supermarket near my garden market to have breakfast or buy food for the day.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'supermarket'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× And so I'm very excited when I've say. Many.

✓ And so I'm very excited when I say many things.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks proper structure and meaning. It needs to be rewritten to convey the intended message clearly.

× Ah yes, people crossed the people usually runs the world in the city where I live because it's your PC open areas with many shops, stores and markets.

✓ Ah yes, people usually cross the roads in the city where I live because it's a very open area with many shops, stores, and markets.

The verb 'crossed' is incorrectly used in past tense; present tense 'cross' fits better here. Also, 'people usually runs' is incorrect subject-verb agreement.

× people usually runs the world in the city where I live

✓ people usually run the roads in the city where I live

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'run' not 'runs'.

× because it's your PC open areas with many shops, stores and markets.

✓ because it's a very open area with many shops, stores, and markets.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrectly used; it should be 'a' to indicate an indefinite area.

× So many people usually forced the ground I think is there so this area very routed in.

✓ So many people usually cross the ground; I think this area is very crowded.

The phrase 'forced the ground' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cross the ground' or 'cross the road'. Also, 'routed in' is incorrect; 'crowded' fits better.

× The laborers in Miles City are general in good condition, because a once a month the local government Mika always effort to repair and afraid the growth to insource more traffic flows.

✓ The roads in Miles City are generally in good condition because once a month the local government makes efforts to repair and maintain them to handle more traffic flow.

'Laborers' is incorrect; it should be 'roads'. 'General' should be 'generally' as an adverb. 'Mika always effort' is incorrect; it should be 'makes efforts'. 'Afraid the growth to insource' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'maintain them to handle'.

× In urban city where I leave us in some rose I think need improvement because some traits are often connected an all traffic terms which are craze accidence.

✓ In the urban city where I live, some roads need improvement because some streets are often congested with traffic, which causes accidents.

'Leave us in some rose' is incorrect; it should be 'live, some roads'. 'Traits' should be 'streets'. 'Connected an all traffic terms' is incorrect; it should be 'congested with traffic'. 'Craze accidence' is incorrect; it should be 'causes accidents'.

× So I think some trees in my city need improvement.

✓ So I think some roads in my city need improvement.

'Trees' is incorrect in context; it should be 'roads'.