Road— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and improve naturalness by using varied expressions and linking words. For example, instead of repeating 'busy' and 'peak hours', you can say 'The roads are usually crowded during rush hours, such as early mornings and late afternoons, when most people commute to and from work.'

예시: The roads in my area are usually crowded during rush hours, such as early mornings and late afternoons, when most people commute to and from work. For instance, Main Street near my house often suffers from heavy traffic jams at these times.

제안: Improve vocabulary and correct minor errors to sound more natural. For example, use 'shopping districts' instead of 'chopping districts' and add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, people frequently cross the road in my city, especially in busy areas such as shopping districts and near public transport stops. Moreover, many crossings are well regulated with traffic lights and signals to ensure pedestrian safety.

제안: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. For example, replace 'both left and and even surf surfaces' with 'uneven or rough surfaces'. Also, use linking words to contrast ideas.

예시: The roads in my city are generally in good condition, as most main streets are well paved and maintained regularly. However, some smaller roads and residential areas have uneven or rough surfaces, which can be problematic for drivers.

제안: Clarify unclear words and fix grammar mistakes. Use specific examples and linking words to explain reasons clearly. For instance, replace 'Ministries' with 'main roads' and 'both and unclear Rd. markings' with 'faded and unclear road markings'.

예시: Yes, I believe the roads in my city definitely need improvement. Main roads are often congested and poorly maintained, which causes frequent traffic jams and accidents. For example, faded and unclear road markings make driving quite challenging and unsafe.

× Yes, the roads in my area are quite busy, especially during peak hours like mornings and evenings when people complete their work.

✓ Yes, the roads in my area are quite busy, especially during peak hours like mornings and evenings when people commute to work.

The phrase 'complete their work' is incorrect in this context because it implies finishing work rather than traveling to work. The correct verb is 'commute to work' to describe people traveling during peak hours.

× Yes, people frequently cross the road in the city where I live, especially in busy areas like chopping districts and near public transport stops.

✓ Yes, people frequently cross the road in the city where I live, especially in busy areas like shopping districts and near public transport stops.

The word 'chopping' is a misspelling of 'shopping'. Using the correct adjective 'shopping' is necessary to convey the intended meaning.

× The roads in my city are generally in in good condition, with most main streets being well paved and maintained regularly.

✓ The roads in my city are generally in good condition, with most main streets being well paved and maintained regularly.

The phrase 'in in good condition' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Removing the duplicate 'in' corrects the sentence.

× However, some smaller roads and residential areas tend to have both left and and even surf surfaces.

✓ However, some smaller roads and residential areas tend to have both left and even surf surfaces.

The phrase 'left and and even surf surfaces' contains a repeated 'and' and the word 'surf' is likely a typo for 'rough'. Correcting these errors improves clarity.

× However, some smaller roads and residential areas tend to have both left and and even surf surfaces.

✓ However, some smaller roads and residential areas tend to have both paved and even rough surfaces.

The words 'left' and 'surf' are incorrect adjectives describing road surfaces. The correct adjectives are 'paved' and 'rough' to describe road conditions.

× Ministries are often congested and poorly maintained which causes frequent traffic jams and accident.

✓ Main streets are often congested and poorly maintained which causes frequent traffic jams and accidents.

The word 'Ministries' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'main streets' to refer to roads. Also, 'accident' should be plural 'accidents' to agree with 'frequent' and 'traffic jams'.

× For example, both and unclear Rd. markings make driving quite challenging and unsafe.

✓ For example, both faded and unclear road markings make driving quite challenging and unsafe.

The phrase 'both and unclear Rd. markings' is incomplete and incorrect. Adding 'faded' before 'and' and expanding 'Rd.' to 'road' corrects the sentence structure and clarity.