Road— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达较为自然，但句子结构稍显简单，且“busy filled with traffic”表达重复。建议使用更简洁且准确的表达方式，如“the roads are very busy with heavy traffic”。

예시: Yes, I live in downtown Shenzhen, so the roads nearby are very busy with heavy traffic.

제안: 回答直接且内容相关，但缺少连接词使句子显得简单。建议使用连接词如“because”来增强句子逻辑性，同时可以丰富细节。

예시: Yes, people cross the road frequently because they need to rush to work or school, especially during the morning and evening rush hours.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“less busier”应为“less busy”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I think the roads in my city are less busy compared to other large cities like Shanghai, so there are fewer traffic jams and more bicycles and electric vehicles on the roads.

제안: 回答表达清晰，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“holes on it”应为“holes in them”。建议使用更准确的表达并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I believe some roads in my city are damaged with holes in them, so it would be better if they were repaired or replaced with new ones to ensure safety.

× Yes, I live in the downtown of Shenzhen so the roads nearby are very busy filled with traffic.

✓ Yes, I live in downtown Shenzhen, so the roads nearby are very busy and filled with traffic.

“the downtown”中的“the”不需要，且“downtown”作为不可数名词不加冠词；另外，句子中缺少连接词“and”使句子更通顺。

× I think the roads in my city are less busier compared to other large cities like Shanghai.

✓ I think the roads in my city are less busy compared to other large cities like Shanghai.

“less busier”是错误的比较级用法，busy的比较级是busier，不能和less连用，应直接用less busy。

× There are less traffic jams in my city and more bicycles or electronic vehicles.

✓ There are fewer traffic jams in my city and more bicycles or electric vehicles.

“traffic jams”是可数名词，表示数量时应使用“fewer”而非“less”；另外，“electronic vehicles”应改为“electric vehicles”，更符合常用表达。

× Yes, I believe some roads in my city are damaged with some holes on it, so it would be better if they can be improved and replaced with new roads.

✓ Yes, I believe some roads in my city are damaged with some holes in them, so it would be better if they can be improved and replaced with new roads.

“holes on it”中的介词“on”不合适，应该用“in”表示“洞在路面里”；同时，“it”指代不明确，应改为复数“them”与“roads”一致。