Road— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details without repeating phrases. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh'.

예시: No, the roads near where I live are not very busy because I live in the suburbs, where there are fewer cars compared to the city center.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains repeated words. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain how people cross the road safely.

예시: Yes, people do cross the roads in my city, but they usually use zebra crossings and follow the traffic signs to stay safe.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Start with a clear statement about the road condition, then explain why, using linking words and complete sentences.

예시: The roads in my city are in good condition because there are many traffic police officers at intersections, which helps people obey the rules and cross safely.

제안: Your answer has repeated words and grammatical errors. Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using proper grammar.

예시: Honestly, I think some busy roads in my city need improvement because they often have traffic jams, causing people to wait for a long time.

× Uh, not really. The road is not very busy near the road near my live near where I live is not very busy because I live in the suburb and there are of there are there are few cars.

✓ Uh, not really. The road near where I live is not very busy because I live in the suburb and there are few cars.

The original sentence is confusing and repetitive, causing sentence structure errors. Simplifying and removing redundant phrases improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Absolutely yes, but they will they, they, but they cross the road will through the zebra crossing and with the signpost.

✓ Absolutely yes, but they cross the road using the zebra crossing and following the signposts.

The phrase 'cross the road will through' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'using' for the method of crossing, and 'following' for obeying signposts. Also, redundant words were removed for clarity.

× It is good because honestly it is good because there are many police traffic police in a beside the intersection and people will obey the rules and cross the.

✓ It is good because there are many traffic police beside the intersections, and people obey the rules when crossing the road.

The original sentence is repetitive and incomplete ('cross the.'). Correcting sentence structure and completing the thought improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× To be honestly I think some some busy busy Rd. can be improve because there are always a traffic jam there and people need to wait a long time.

✓ To be honest, I think some busy roads can be improved because there are always traffic jams there and people need to wait a long time.

'To be honestly' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'To be honest.' 'Can be improve' should be 'can be improved' using the past participle after 'can be.' Also, 'busy busy Rd.' is corrected to 'busy roads' for clarity and correctness.