Perfume— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和语音停顿，句子应简洁明了，表达清晰。

예시: Yes, I really like a perfume brand called Nuclear from Paris. Its fragrance has a refreshing coconut scent that is not too strong. I find it perfect for everyday use, especially when I enjoy nature. The aroma makes me feel confident.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意冠词和词汇的正确使用，句子结构应更流畅，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I use perfume every day because it helps me feel more confident and refreshed. For example, I usually choose a fragrance from Nuclear, a famous Parisian brand, because I like its unique and long-lasting scent. Wearing perfume has become an important part of my daily routine.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，建议完整表达观点，注意词汇拼写和句子完整性，提供具体例子时要完整描述。

예시: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift because it shows I have put thought into selecting something meaningful. I usually try to choose a scent that matches the recipient's style and personality, making the gift more personal and special. For example, I once bought a Mugler perfume for my friend who loves floral fragrances.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰，建议加强语法和词汇学习，注意句子逻辑和连贯性。

예시: Yes, I think perfumes are generally quite expensive. This is mainly because of the brand reputation and luxurious packaging, which often increase the cost. For example, famous brands like Chanel and Dior usually price their perfumes higher due to their quality and image.

× Is I really like the perfume brand called Nuclear which is from Paris.

✓ I really like the perfume brand called Nuclear which is from Paris.

句子中主语是“I”，谓语动词应为“like”，不需要“Is”。“Is”是第三人称单数形式的be动词，和主语“I”不匹配，导致主谓不一致。应去掉“Is”。

× It's fragrance has a. Uh, Sir, Sir to coconut scent.

✓ Its fragrance has a coconut scent.

“It's”是“it is”或“it has”的缩写，表示“它是”或“它有”，而这里需要表示“它的”，应使用物主代词“its”。另外，句子中“Sir, Sir to”无意义，应删除。

× That is the refresh and not too strong.

✓ That is refreshing and not too strong.

“refresh”是动词或名词，形容词形式应为“refreshing”，用来描述香味令人感到清新的特性。

× especially enjoys nature and the present.

✓ I especially enjoy nature and the present.

缺少主语，且“enjoys”是第三人称单数形式，主语“I”应使用动词原形“enjoy”。

× Aroma which makes me feel confident.

✓ An aroma which makes me feel confident.

句子缺少冠词，且应与前文连贯，改为“An aroma which makes me feel confident.”更完整。

× Yes, I use per perfume everyday because it helps me feel more confident than refreshed.

✓ Yes, I use perfume every day because it helps me feel more confident and refreshed.

“per perfume”应为“perfume”，“everyday”应分开为“every day”表示“每天”。“more confident than refreshed”表达不当，应为“more confident and refreshed”。

× I usually choose a fragrance from Nuclear, a famous brand from Paris, because I like it's unique and long lasting scent.

✓ I usually choose a fragrance from Nuclear, a famous brand from Paris, because I like its unique and long-lasting scent.

“it's”是“it is”的缩写，表示“它是”，此处应使用物主代词“its”表示“它的”。“long lasting”应加连字符，构成复合形容词“long-lasting”。

× Seeing a wearing perfume has become important part of my daily routine.

✓ Wearing perfume has become an important part of my daily routine.

“Seeing a wearing perfume”结构不正确，应去掉“Seeing a”，并在“important”前加冠词“an”。

× I usually try to choose a cent set matches their style and personality, which makes the gift feel more personal and special.

✓ I usually try to choose a scent that matches their style and personality, which makes the gift feel more personal and special.

“cent set”应为“scent that”，“that”引导定语从句，修饰“scent”。

× For example, I once bought a Mugler perfume for.

✓ For example, I once bought a Mugler perfume for someone.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充宾语使句子完整。

× Yes, I think perfume are generally quite expensive.

✓ Yes, I think perfume is generally quite expensive.

“perfume”作为不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。

× This is many because of brand reputation and the lectures packaging which often increases the score the cost.

✓ This is mainly because of brand reputation and the luxurious packaging which often increases the cost.

“This is many”表达错误，应为“This is mainly”。“lectures packaging”应为“luxurious packaging”。“increases the score the cost”语序错误，应为“increases the cost”。

× For example, famous brands like Chanel, Dior usually pricier perfume higher due to their quality and image.

✓ For example, famous brands like Chanel and Dior usually price perfume higher due to their quality and image.

“pricier perfume higher”结构错误，应为“price perfume higher”。