Perfume— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有很多发音和语法错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你练习正确发音，并用简单明了的句子表达你的喜好，比如直接说你喜欢什么类型的香水。

예시: Yes, I like perfume. I have many kinds, such as floral and fresh scents. I enjoy wearing them because they make me feel confident.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子不连贯。建议你用完整句子表达使用频率，并说明具体场合。

예시: Yes, I use perfume in my daily life, but not very often. I usually wear it when I go out with my friends.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多。建议你用简单句子说明你会买香水作为礼物，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I often buy perfume as a gift for my friends. For example, I gave a floral perfume to my best friend at university, and she loved it.

제안: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误严重。建议你练习用简单句表达观点，比如香水价格取决于品牌和质量。

예시: I think the price of perfume depends on its quality and brand. Some perfumes are very expensive, while others are affordable.

× Yes, I like purfing.

✓ Yes, I like perfume.

这里单词拼写错误，应该是 perfume（香水），而不是 purfing。虽然不是严格的单复数错误，但属于词汇使用错误，需注意单词拼写。

× I have a lot of style per friend like the flowers that smells and water smells.

✓ I have a lot of styles per friend, like the flowers that smell and water smells.

style 应该用复数 styles，因为表示多种风格；flowers 是复数，谓语动词 smell 也应使用原形，因为主语是复数。

× like the flowers that smells and water smells.

✓ like the flowers that smell and water smells.

flowers 是复数，谓语动词应使用原形 smell，而不是 smells。

× A large of smells about the proof and I have.

✓ A large number of smells about the perfume I have.

这里应使用 a large number of 来修饰可数名词 smells，而不是 a large of。proof 应为 perfume。

× Yes, I use per friend in my daily life, but I'm not often use it.

✓ Yes, I use perfume in my daily life, but I don't often use it.

per friend 应为 perfume；否定句中应使用 don't often use 而不是 I'm not often use。

× It was. Hours, only use it when I go go outside with my friends.

✓ I only use it when I go outside with my friends.

这里时态应为一般现在时，因为描述习惯动作；去掉多余的 was 和重复的 go。

× Yes. By preference as a gift to my friends.

✓ Yes. I buy perfume as a gift for my friends.

buy 拼写错误，应为 buy；表达买香水作为礼物，使用 buy perfume as a gift for my friends 更准确。

× Such as less chance, less years.

✓ Such as lavender and roses.

原句词汇错误，推测想表达的是薰衣草（lavender）和玫瑰（roses），应使用正确名词。

× I buy her flower smells perfume to my best friends in university and she's love edge.

✓ I buy floral-scented perfume for my best friends at university and she loves it.

flower smells perfume 应改为 floral-scented perfume；buy her 应改为 buy for her；she's love edge 应为 she loves it。

× I think is depends only are perfumes kwality if you bought a preferred in earth.

✓ I think it depends on the quality of the perfume you buy on earth.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语 it，depends 后应接介词 on，quality 拼写错误。

× Big Sick no.

✓ Big brand, no.

推测原意为“大品牌”，应为 big brand；原句无意义。

× Then it was very. More expensive.

✓ Then it is much more expensive.

时态应为一般现在时；使用 much more expensive 表示程度比较。

× If you buy another. Sir.

✓ If you buy another one, sir.

句子不完整，缺少宾语 one，且应连接成完整句。