Perfume— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，表达有些重复且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且使用更自然的连接词。

예시: No, I don't like perfume because it's quite expensive and I can't afford it. Besides, I have allergies and dislike the strong scent it has.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少逻辑连接词。建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: It depends. Since I have sensitive skin, I usually avoid perfume. However, if I attend a conference or a party, I might wear a little to feel more confident.

제안: 表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议先明确回答，再用具体细节支持，并注意语法正确。

예시: It depends. I usually check if my friend likes perfume. If he does, I would choose a specific, possibly expensive perfume as a gift.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并提供具体的比较细节。

예시: Yes, I think perfumes from big brands are very expensive, sometimes unaffordable. However, they often smell similar to cheaper brands.

× I have a sensitive skin that maybe helps some energy is really weird

✓ I have sensitive skin that maybe helps some energy is really weird

“skin”在这里是不可数名词，不需要加冠词“a”。

× If he helps on him and he behave like he likes some more perfumes

✓ If he helps him and he behaves like he likes some more perfumes

“help”后面不需要介词“on”，直接加宾语；“behave”第三人称单数应加-s。

× he behave like he likes some more perfumes

✓ he behaves like he likes some more perfumes

主语是第三人称单数，动词“behave”应加-s。

× I saw perfume especially of the big brands have expensive prices

✓ I saw perfumes especially of the big brands have expensive prices

“perfume”应使用复数形式“perfumes”，因为指多个品牌的香水。

× that even how people can cannot afford it

✓ that even many people cannot afford it

“how people can cannot”结构错误，应改为“many people cannot”。

× it smells like the same with a small brand perfume

✓ it smells the same as a small brand perfume

“smells like the same with”用法错误，应使用“smells the same as”。