Perfume— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response to the question, avoid unnecessary hesitation, and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid asking questions back to the examiner. For example, start with a clear statement about your liking for perfume, then explain why.

예시: Yes, I really like perfume. My favorite one is Lancome because it makes me feel confident and comfortable whenever I wear it.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and incomplete. Try to structure your answer clearly by stating whether you use perfume daily, then give specific examples or reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I use perfume every day in the morning. For example, in summer, I prefer fresh floral scents because they feel light and refreshing.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and use correct grammar. Also, provide a clear opinion and explain your reasons with linking words.

예시: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift for my husband. However, it is difficult because I need to know his preferences and which scent suits him best.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct answer to the question, explain your opinion clearly, and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words to compare different types of perfumes.

예시: I think perfumes vary in price. Some are affordable, while others are quite expensive depending on the brand and quality.

× I will buy a perfume as a gift for my husbands.

✓ I will buy a perfume as a gift for my husband.

The word 'husbands' is plural, but the context suggests referring to a single husband. Using the singular form 'husband' is correct here to match the intended meaning.

× I'm thinking in my bathroom, which bathroom I would like to prefer today

✓ I'm thinking in my bathroom about which perfume I would like to prefer today

The phrase 'thinking in my bathroom' is acceptable, but the sentence lacks the correct preposition to introduce the object of thought. Adding 'about' clarifies what the speaker is thinking about. Also, 'which bathroom I would like to prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'which perfume I would like to prefer' to make sense in context.

× I love performs exactly one of them is my favorite

✓ I love perfumes; exactly one of them is my favorite

The word 'performs' is a misspelling or misuse; the correct word is 'perfumes'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding a semicolon improves clarity. The pronoun usage is corrected by replacing 'performs' with the correct noun 'perfumes'.

× Is it Lancome perfume?

✓ Is it a Lancome perfume?

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'Lancome perfume'. This is necessary because 'Lancome perfume' is a countable noun and the sentence is asking about one item.

× I will like this when I use this perfume.

✓ I will like it when I use this perfume.

The pronoun 'this' is repeated unnecessarily. Replacing the second 'this' with 'it' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× in which favor this person can feel good.

✓ in which fragrance this person can feel good.

The word 'favor' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'fragrance' when talking about perfumes. This is a vocabulary error affecting the prepositional phrase.