Perfume— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且直接，但表达稍显简单，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体原因或例子，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I like perfume a lot because it allows me to express my personality uniquely. Moreover, wearing a nice scent can instantly improve my mood and boost my confidence throughout the day.

제안: 回答简短且有语法错误（make应为makes），缺少细节和连接词。建议扩展回答，提供具体例子，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I use perfume every day because I love the variety of scents available. For instance, I often choose floral fragrances in the morning as they help me feel fresh and positive.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法和逻辑问题（"they always love you so much"不明确）。建议明确表达理由，使用更合适的词汇和连接词。

예시: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift because many of my female friends appreciate nice fragrances. Additionally, perfume is a practical and thoughtful present that suits various occasions.

제안: 回答较完整且逻辑清晰，但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Well, I think the price of perfumes varies depending on the brand. For example, perfumes from lesser-known brands are usually affordable, whereas high-end brands can be quite expensive due to their quality and reputation.

× Yes I do, I love the smells of them and it just make my moods better.

✓ Yes I do, I love the smell of them and it just makes my mood better.

这里'smells'应为单数'smell'，因为指的是香水的气味作为一个整体；'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，因为主语是单数的'it'；'moods'应为单数'mood'，表示心情。

× I think it's a perfect gift to my female friends because they always love you so much and I think it's very useful too.

✓ I think it's a perfect gift for my female friends because they always love it so much and I think it's very useful too.

'gift to my female friends'应改为'gift for my female friends'，介词用法错误；'they always love you so much'中的'you'应为'it'，指代礼物。