Perfume— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like perfume?
수험생
Actually I don't like perfume because it always makes me feel uncomfortable and I am actually allergic to perfume. It makes me feel dizzy sometimes.
시험관
Do you use perfume in your daily life?
수험생
Honestly speaking, I never use any perfume in my daily life because perfume always makes me feel uncomfortable and sometimes dizzy, so I just prefer to be natural and I I like to maintain a natural scent.
시험관
Will you buy perfume as a gift?
수험생
Yes, I will. I will buy perfume as gifts for my family members. For example, last year I bought a brand of perfume for my wife and for my elderly sister. Although I seldom use perfume in my daily life, but I think it's a kind of good gift.
시험관
Do you think perfumes are expensive?
수험생
Generally speaking, perfumes are really expensive and they often cost people a lot of money to afford. And not all people can afford perfumes, but there are also some perfumes that are cheap and affordable as long as you are willing to discover.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like perfume?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较为自然且直接，但有些重复，如“actually”出现两次，且句子较长，建议简化表达，避免重复。
예시: No, I don't like perfume because it makes me feel uncomfortable and sometimes dizzy due to allergies.
Do you use perfume in your daily life?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答内容重复前一问题，且有语句重复（"I I"），建议避免重复信息，简洁表达，并注意语法准确。
예시: No, I don't use perfume daily because it causes discomfort. I prefer to keep my natural scent.
Will you buy perfume as a gift?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答较完整，提供了具体例子，但句子连接处有语法错误（"Although... but"），建议使用正确的连接词，提升表达流畅度。
예시: Yes, I buy perfume as gifts for my family. For example, last year I bought a perfume for my wife and my elderly sister because I think it's a thoughtful present.
Do you think perfumes are expensive?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构稍显重复，建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复词汇。
예시: Generally, perfumes are expensive and not everyone can afford them. However, there are some affordable options if you are willing to look for them.
문법
× Although I seldom use perfume in my daily life, but I think it's a kind of good gift.
✓ Although I seldom use perfume in my daily life, I think it's a kind of good gift.
句中使用了“Although”和“but”两个转折连词，造成重复，应去掉其中一个。建议去掉“but”，使句子结构正确。
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